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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very very very hot indeed :D:D
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see that I reviewed this before, but I've got a bit more from it this time.
This was perhaps a less usual pairing, but it makes all the sense in the world the way you wrote it. Ron is basically a laid-back, easygoing young man, comfortable with his nature. Draco is more tense, wanting, grasping - needing Ron the moment he sees what Ron has on offer and going after it single-mindedly.
The sex was written beautifully and was delightfully descriptive. I liked how when they were intimate, a total flip-flop occurred. Calculating Draco became submissive Draco and easygoing Ron became the dominant one. I think Ron may have a clinging, needy Draco on his hands now, rather like a tick. At least he'll be getting some enjoyment out of his new 'appendage'. Very nice, indeed!
This was perhaps a less usual pairing, but it makes all the sense in the world the way you wrote it. Ron is basically a laid-back, easygoing young man, comfortable with his nature. Draco is more tense, wanting, grasping - needing Ron the moment he sees what Ron has on offer and going after it single-mindedly.
The sex was written beautifully and was delightfully descriptive. I liked how when they were intimate, a total flip-flop occurred. Calculating Draco became submissive Draco and easygoing Ron became the dominant one. I think Ron may have a clinging, needy Draco on his hands now, rather like a tick. At least he'll be getting some enjoyment out of his new 'appendage'. Very nice, indeed!
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was so deliciously hot!!!!!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was so amazing. so freaking hot
*shivers*
I loved it. especially the draco begging to be fucked. great job
*shivers*
I loved it. especially the draco begging to be fucked. great job
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN! Bloody Hell!
*speechless*
*speechless*
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wild ride. For Ron, Draco and the reader. LOL You drew their coupling so realistically, with good detail, yet with some basic connection between them as individuals, too. And I agree, it was more well-rounded with the beginning added. I liked your presentation of two young men finding something in common. I hope Ron doesn't mind that he's now in Draco's permanent sights. Great job!
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
who's Romilda?
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love how Draco all possessive with Ron. LOL
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty hot...do you have a story cooked up to go with it...could be really interesting if you did. I enjoyed it.