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I'd email you of the update luvhp,
but i didn't have your email so
I'll hope you just check in soon.

Enjoy :)

*HUGS* YAY and Update. I hope you have another one soon. :)

Holy hell, forget any plot, this si strictly PWP! LOVE IT! Please email me when you update this wonderful erotic story!

I loved it, you should make Draco possessive. I'll be waiting for the next chapter...


Nobody

Grrrr. What a place to stop. You are such a damn tease...and I love it. Def. cant wait for the next chappie now.

that is so hot,u gotta post the next chapter!

NOOO! update asap!

Oops. I have a problem with spelling. I'm very sorry.
I'll make sure i go through it over and over to make it makes sense
and that words are right.
Thanks Utopia.

last bit 'Patients' is the type going to a Doctor's surgery, I think you were looking for patience? Don't worry, homophones (words that sound the same, but have different spellings and meanings) are quite common, and a spell check won't pick them up because it only looks at words, not the context of a sentence.

The formatting in this was wonderfully better - I could read this with no problem! The previous formatting was Hell on my dyslexia!

So, we know how Hermione won the trip, something like being the 1'000'000th buyer of something? and was spirited away to the chateau.

This looks better and better, but be careful with the upcoming smut - first time smut is a b**ch to write as it doesn't really follow any clear pattern like experienced smut can. Try and keep it realistic.

Damn Alarm indeed. Oh how I hate when that happens. message e when you update please noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au

Cant wait for what happens in the coming chappies