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for A Christmas Break

by ghildred

person equinox
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you stopped in the wrong place. Keep the story going...its a good twist to what the book didn't do. :)
person moirane
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats mean. leaving it there. grr
person jay86
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who would have thought Hermione would actually let loose lol keep up the great story writing!.
person missmonet
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more omg that was so good i hope that you continue with this story.
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
write more I always did like this pairing.
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow so far so good cant wait to read more
person Lilac
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more.
person egb67
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! that's great stuff....but you've left us hanging and I'm dying to read what comes next (like we don't know!!!). Your writing style is very good and quite effective and this is a very, very good start to an adult-themed fanfic.

I will save this as a word doc. once it's finished - that's something I do only with stories I really like.


Regards,

the_scribbler
person tommye
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story imgeorgenotfred. can't wait to read more.