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for A Christmas Break

by ghildred

person Simon
schedule October 17, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Wow, even though this diverges from canon pretty quickly, it doesn't matter, because you can sense the thrill they get, not just from feeling alive, but after they start having sex several times in one day. I'm not sure about the final chapter, I can't see how Harry and Hermione would keep their desires in check to allow their separate relationships to pan out and not affect them by having sex with each other behind their partners backs

person luvhp
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course they DID@!!!!!

Loved it, very sweet.
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great story. i really liked how you had their friendship grow stronger. and the fact that they ended up with ron and ginny at the end was the correct way to go. there are different types of love and while they have the love of friendship for each other, the romantic love is there for the weasleys. the only negative i'll give you is the spelling and grammar. that needs fixing.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh they did, and the Weaselys are idiots to not catch on.
person Monkey Lady
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far this has been a pretty good fic. I really like this pairing, but not enough people do it. Keep it up! :)
person Ron is gay
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that this isn't a one time only thing. It would ruin the whole story!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, if that happend wouldn't there be consequences? You can't do something like that and not get off with no consequences.
person tommye
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the third chapter.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope that you are going to write more here cause i want to know more.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was actually good.