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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update, I'm glad that they're getting the support they need from the ones they know and care about. But I must admit to being rather curious about what Lucius has got up his sleeve.....? Can't wait for more!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent. I hope that Lucius won't try anything now that Severus and Hermione are married, but if he does then please let them both be alright. I can't wait to read more soon.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter made this sound interesting, but once you got to Severus and Hermione's characters... they are just way too out of character. It makes it a bit annoying to read, especially since they all seem to have a 'flat' talking personality. The plot, (i love ml fics), seems good, but I really suggest going back and making the characters more like themselves.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this! I liked that Severus behaved like a mature man smart enough to make the best out of a situation he knows he will not be able to avoid. I also liked how the spoke about respect and fidelity, two very important parts in a marriage not tufted on love, but between two persons forced into a situation and wanting to make the best of it!
I hope ofcourse that inbetween a satisfying development of Severus and Hermiones relationsship you will wind plenty of time for some heavy Ron bashing? His treatment of Hermione makes him deserve pain and humiliation and lots of it! I hate the Ron/Hermione pairing, never have two been so unsuitable for eachother, and I am no fan of Ron so any damage done to him....:-))) I expect Lucius to make his disapproval of twarted plans known, but have faith in you having Severus twarting his plans even more. Update again soon!!!
I hope ofcourse that inbetween a satisfying development of Severus and Hermiones relationsship you will wind plenty of time for some heavy Ron bashing? His treatment of Hermione makes him deserve pain and humiliation and lots of it! I hate the Ron/Hermione pairing, never have two been so unsuitable for eachother, and I am no fan of Ron so any damage done to him....:-))) I expect Lucius to make his disapproval of twarted plans known, but have faith in you having Severus twarting his plans even more. Update again soon!!!
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How dare you not tell me you started a new story? tries to give you an evil glare but gives up
I love how you did started this. Naturally, nothing is like it is in the book so I am loving it even more. I hope you will email me and let me know when you update.
Awesome start and I can tell it will be an awesome story like always.
Love ya sis,
I love how you did started this. Naturally, nothing is like it is in the book so I am loving it even more. I hope you will email me and let me know when you update.
Awesome start and I can tell it will be an awesome story like always.
Love ya sis,
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I can't believe that Ron is acting like a jerk. I can't wait to read more soon.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What bug flew up Ron's arse? lol Great updates, I can't wait to see the Malfoy's reaction to this new development. Hope you can update again soon!
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome :D
I can't wait to read more.
This is the first story i've ever read where snape had family <3
I can't wait to read more.
This is the first story i've ever read where snape had family <3
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love ml fics. this one so far has the makings for a great one.