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I hope that Narcissa got the Dementor's Kiss for trying to kill Severus,just like her husband got. I am glad that Draco finally learned that muggleborns are just the same as purebloods. I think that it took a lot for him to apologize though after being raised the way he was. I look forward to reading more to see what Severus and Hermione are having. I think it would be nice for Hermione's mother to also find someone to love and be with since her divorce is finalized.

I like it. Please update soon.

a very rushed chapter. :(

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Well, this is a nice story. Its a cute idea and has a nice little plot. However, I think that everything is happening much too fast. They fell in love so quickly and you didnt really get to see that develope. Nor with the "revenge". That was a good twist to this, but it just wasnt developed completely.With Draco, I love that he turned "good" but it was so sudden, almost random. The reader never got to feel the love, the hate, or the remorse. Perhaps, this is how you prefer to write. It just seemed to me, that the reader couldnt really get involved with the story.

Good luck,

Yours in Eloquence

Ah, and the confusion sets in, one step before realization

Excellent. I am glad that Hermione and Severus get to remain married and that Lucius has been sentenced to the Dementor's Kiss. It serves him right because he tried to break up a marriage just to secure the Malfoy line and then kill her off. I can't wait to read more to see how Draco reacts to the news about his father.

Thoughts on chapter 6
Even though I like the story there is something that really threw me off. You have described Severus quite a bit out of character to be a sensible person (no problem with that, I do that too). Then they have their wedding night, Hermione still being a virgin and there is no real touching once there in bed. Instead Severus puts his hand right between her legs. I felt like "What?!? Did I miss something?" It's just so unexpected fast that and the way Severus is in this story

extremely fluffy and a very off canon snape i must say. but entertaining none the less.
Keep it coming. I'm intrigued as to how Lucius will challange their marraige

Best Wishes
Slytherin-Princess

I absolutely love this chapter. I especially liked Draco's reaction at the end. It is so good to see instead of the impulsive reaction expected he began to question his parents ideals. Excellent job and keep up the wonderful work!