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for A Marriage Made in Heaven...

by slygriff21

person CB13
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Just a short pointer - I think that instead of the marriage law being "repelled", perhaps the word you're looking for is "repealed"?

Cheers, and thanks for writing!

CB
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes. The dreaded pregnancy hormones. I remember them well. I'd feel cranky and be bitchy and then feel guilty for being bitchy for no particular reason. And then I remember that I was preggers and had every damn reason in the book to be bitchy even if there wasn't really a reason. To hell with logic and reason. Being bitchy for no reason is a pregnant woman's prerogative...men would be a lot better off if they just accepted that. They don't even have to try to understand it. Just accept it. lol Anyway, now that I'm done preaching....great update! I can't wait for more!
person Winnifred
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger! :'(

You update fast, so I guess I can survive...

Hehe :D

person nanoq
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I love reading it.
I'm a little scared for Hermione, I hope she will alright..

I love mythbusters!! I'm waching it right now!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that both of them will be ok. I can't wait to read more soon to see what happens.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
I have been following your story since it was first posted, and justed wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying it. Keep up the good writing...I cannot wait until the next chapter.
person Tenar10r
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww cute!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I am glad that Severus apologized to Hermione and showed her that he loves everything about her. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.