schedule
January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
She really is perfectly matched to Snape. I hate that Lucius is rearing his ugly head. It is hard enough for them to form a couple without dealing with a psychopath. Excellent so far. p
schedule
January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Love it and it looks like maybe Draco will see the error of his parents. It is refreshing to have SS with a good and loving family, which allows him to be human. Excellent! p
schedule
January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, but I felt that most of the conflict was over before it really even began.
schedule
August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have jaime hynamen as a healer, i laugh for ages when i saw that. i wonder if they will ever get him to deliver a baby on mythbusters
schedule
May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nice story for an OOC story. I liked the plot but there were numerous grammatical mistakes littered throughout the story. Usually, it doesn't bother me but you made the same mistakes over and over again that it started to grate on my nerves (luckily it didn't turn me off of reading the rest of the story)...for example, it should me "Hermione and I," not "Me and Hermione." The correct punctuation marks should be used, "?" for questions (not ","). Sorry, it's just that I noticed similar mistakes in your other stories as well. If you can improve on this, then the reading for the reader would be more enjoyable. If you need a beta in the future, feel free to contact me.
schedule
May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I realy like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jamie hynaman hn...isn't that a mythbuster?!!!!! lol great finish btw ;p