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person Hailey
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with all of your stories.
This one is amazing
and I'm thinking a sequel would be nice
I don't know if I can handle just a one shot from you, it makes me want MOREEE
Keep writing
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schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! I love it! Excellent as usual.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes you just need a fic when someone gets a good fucking. This is just that kind. I enjoyed most of it. The setup was good, the sex was good, and the first part of the conclusion was good. I got the feeling you were trying to get from the common room to the library revelation with a minimum of fuss, but it almost felt a bit forced in the journey. Still, good stuff overall. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
person amyfeddy
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please, I need, I want, please please please. I'll beg more if you want me to.
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll be one of those people who'll beg for a sequel...please please please! I love this even though the pairing wasn't canon.

I hope to see the next chapter email me when you add to it!

Great stuff and keep up the good work!
person missbja
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all_fics from LJ:

What if I want to read Ron/Lucy? hum? so I can hate him even more? XD

I absolutly loved this. I so liked the way he convinced her. And I'm sure it was easier for her to accept she lost her virginity to him since she knew Ron cheated on her.

Thsi was so exciting and so...hum...naughty and made me want to be with my boyfriend and caress him too! :D

This was a very good Valentine surprise! You could now start to make "Sunday Surprise"

Or even "Every day of the week Surprise" ! *lmao*

schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I do agree with you that this was a non-PWP, lol. Because it had a plot, albiet, a plot whose sole purpose is for two people to have sex. :P Haha, but nothing wrong with that. I liked it a lot. I do have to say one thing though, I think that it was unbelievable in the sense that even if they were whispering, they talked A LOT and eventually Hermione would have noticed that it wasn't Ron's voice. I don't care what anyone says but I know that even when you whisper you can still decipher between voices you know? But, that being said, WHO CARES! Lol. Because fanfiction is fantasy right? And so in this fantasy, she just had no idea that it wasn't Ron. :)

I do like the idea though. And I was really excited at the end when she found out that it was him. I was hoping she would. ^_^ I'm somewhat glad that their won't be any sort of sequel becauase now I can imagine that she goes back to her dorm and contemplates the entire thing, replaying the night in her head except with Draco instead of Ron. And then she goes back to him and they do it again! :) And again. And again. And its okay because Ron is with Lucy and so he isn't alone. I love Ron, he is funny, so I want him to have some action too. Though, in this it did sadden me that Hermione's sexual needs were totally neglected by him, whether she had rules or not! Bad boy!

Okay this is really long. I'm done. :) Oh, and if you want to reply here is my email: psychopyro666@mchsi.com Yeah...don't ask lol.
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant and I loved it. A sequel would not be amiss if you were inspired to write one--just saying. :D
person Deandra
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ATK you totally rock! I will read anything you write, love! Thanks for this sweet little bit of erotica. Happy Val's Day!
person janl
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, very hot indeed! Oh please oh please write a sequel!! Would it help if I said pretty please???