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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a fabulous job! Definately! Oh hell yes! Mm Hmm, for sure!
8D
8D
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::::shaking myself off and going to take a cold cold shower::: thanks for that. Perfect night cap!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i truly enjoy this,its hot and kinky.I like it even more that u dont use bad words like f#$k. U manage to make this fanfic erotic without swear words,thats a good thing.
any plan on writing sequel?
any plan on writing sequel?
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good! You have a very good writing style, and it flowed very well. Your grammar is superb, which makes the story twice as good. I want to see more from you!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow so hott want more. i just want to see 'head girl' please!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was HOT! :D I loved it!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Insert shuddering breath here)
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked what you did there. You say smut isn't your forte but I think you did a great job! I think you managed to keep them in character in terms of their attitudes and it made it that much better.