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by klbblk

person joeshmo
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww!! Twins are perfect!! I'm happy he wasn't mad at her. Ohh! I'm excited to read more! This story always makes me smile. Update ASAP! =]
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its great this chapter! i love it! :D hehe
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i would love for her to have twins. that would be cool anyway i love the story
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I am glad that Herione told Tom/Voldemort about being pregnant. I also think it's great that she is having twins. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please let her tell him soon. One never knows if Lucius will remain quiet. I can't wait to read more soon.
person miakitty
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so happy she finaly stand for herself,but she is pregnant,he crucio her twice for kissing lucius,and all it takes for him to earn her forgiveness is by kneeling infront of her and kiss her hand,thats preety weird.
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww great chapter and i LOVED the one shot...one the way to review now! i cant wait for her to tell him that shes prego!
person joeshmo
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! i thought she would have told him as soon as she saw him. he's going to be so mad when he finds out she was keeping things from him! or, maybe he will be So overjoyed that he won't get mad? yeah right! Update soon!
person jossie
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
there are no words to describe how much i love your fanfic,i have read His yesterday and i thought there r no sequel,i nearly cry..
thank goodness u write 'Mine',how come voldemort being so cruel to hermione,he love her,shouldnt he cherished her like a princess?
hermione is one confused little girl isnt she?at one time she hate him as if voldemort is the worst creature in the planet,the next she cant help but fall madly inlove with him.There r so many bad things he had done to her,He cant just say "i'm sorry,i didnt mean to hurt u,i just want u to love me back,thats all.." and then crucio her again and share her with his follower.I mean,yes he can do that but hermione should reject him or continue rebel instead of submit to him 100%.
I hope u dont mind,i just give out my opinion,dont get it wrong,i realy like this story.I know some readers just like to say "OMG this is so hot" but i prefer telling u ecxactly why i like/dislike it.
when r u going to post the next chapter?how long will it be?
person miakitty
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
u have such a great writing ability and all your stories were written beautifully well.I'm a big fans of Draco and i only read Dramione or Draco/OFC fanfic,but after reading His and Mine,i accidently fell in love with voldemort. (that is how powerfull your story is to me)
but sadly it still cant beat my love toward Draco Malfoy,and i'm begging u right now,please write Dramione story.Atleast a oneshot. ,His&Mine are so perfect,i read those two like evryday!If only u can write one dark AU dramione fic,i'll be honour to read it.