rate_review Reviews

Read both of the books absolutely, amazing. You captured both of their personalities very well. I would like to see more of your works!

I loved this story, and His as well. I will definately be passing this story alone to my friends. They'll love it too.

OMG.
I read "His" having no idea what I was getting into when I started reading it, and then I read "Mine."
I think you might be insane. lol Good lordy.

While, I found quite a bit of your material to be very disturbing (and I skipped/skimmed over a bit of it), the main story was very interesting. I was impressed, I would have NEVER thought of a storyline like that in a million years. Wow.

It is a cute ending though.

I have to say, one of the things that did bother me the MOST was Tom's continuous NEED to perform the Cruciatus on her. Oh, I hated it. I hated him. I wanted to try and like him, but ugh, I couldn't. Not even at the end when he hugged his kiddies. He was still an arrogant ass while she was giving birth. That IS something that continued to both me in both stories.

Needless to say, I don't think I'll be reading anything similar to this on purpose in the future. I'm not one for the disturbing/violent stuff.

But yea, kudos and brownie points for being VERY creative and making a complex and highly interesting storyline regardless. It was quite the 'dark' education, lol.

Best of luck with your other stories :o)

Hello, good story. Hope ya will go to next series where Hermione get dark, without her getting angry or annoyed, unlike her husband when she want to hurt people. Unlike her daughter that is bit darker than her, since she want to hurt people. Not to same extend as to her father as you say with no morals. Hermione that was dark when she was in another mode, from one of four founders. It is good idea if you can awake her another mode and maybe blend together or so. It is more like she is tolerate to her husband's darkness, but not accepting fully as she is not same or almost same as him.

This was an incredible ending. I enjoyed reading it and loved how Ava was the more evil child. I am also glad that Severus and Narcissa had a little girl together, and that Draco found a wife as well.

I love this story sad that it is done.
~Ruby~

good chapter i liked it. update soon please.
~Ruby~

This is generally a good story, I think. I did read 'his' first. It's interesting, but there is one thing that annoys me in both this story and in 'his':

Would OF
Should OF
Could OF
Had OF

These should be:

Would HAVE
Should HAVE
Could HAVE
Had HAVE

Sorry. Just seems to appear a lot and it bugs me.

Excellent. I look forward to reading more. I hope that Hermione has a boy and a girl, the boy being the oldest so that Tom gets to name him. Then Hermione will get to name the girl.

love this chapter cant wait to see what happens.
~Ruby~