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Nice! I just heard this song on the radio the other day :)

Another song you might want to look into, I don't know if it's been done, is 3 Libra's by A Perfect Circle:

Threw you the obvious
And you flew with it on your back
A name in your recollection
Down among a million same
Difficult enough to feel a little bit
Disappointed and passed over.
When I've looked right on through,
see you naked but oblivious
and you don't see me

but I threw you the obvious,
Just to see if there's more behind the
Eyes of a fallen angel,
Eyes of a tragedy.

Here I am expecting just a little bit
Too much from the wounded
But I see,
See through it all,
See through,
And see you.

Cause I threw you the obvious
to see what occurs behind the
Eyes of a fallen angel
Eyes of a tragedy

oh well, oh well...

Apparently nothing.
Apparently nothing at all.

You don't
You don't
You don't see me
You don't
You don't
You don't see me
You don't
You don't
You don't see me
You don't
You don't
You don't see me at all

Wow! this story made me want to cry as i was reading it. I could feel her despiration and loss. (listening to the song helped too...lol)
perhaps you should think about doing a epilogue for this oneshot. Loved it!