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for Dark Beauty *Newly Updated Chapters*

by Larentia

person luna love
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see you fixed it. Great chapter too!
person luna love
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should know that chapter 2 and 3 are exactly the same. Other than that it's a great story!
person kalush
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds great wish to hear more
person tiff
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Calli will make a ture friend ever
person Fyre
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww hun its no problem to review a story that has so much potential :) anywhooo take your time developing Calli, if i imagine correctly it will be worth the wait :D and im so glad we are now going to see the shell become broken and the true Calli come though- if only secretly :-]
person tiff
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so she sent Dobby to "help" Harry
person tiff
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how the hedge attacked Draco at the end and the adults did not even hear it. that was great.
person tiff
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Calli she has no one to be with right now eveyone will stay away from her.
person Fyre
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well then she is quiet the ice queen... or not... hmmmm gryfindor? and is she trying to break away... or mearly toying with the idea...? lots of questions :))
person tiff
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start can't wait to see where things will go with this story.