rate_review Reviews

This is good start-up plot - unique. You gonna update, though? I'm lookin' forward to chapter two.

just to let you know, i absolutely love this. your writing style is quite captivating (especially when you put it up against some of the crap that's floating around out there). can't wait to see where you're going with this, looking forward to when you finally update! good luck with that, and the wisdom teeth, yeah, total suckage. thankfully, my roommate didn't bitch about it too much when it happened to her.

good chapter

this is so weird... weird enough that i'm actually looking forward to the next chapter...
too many cross overs might make a mess of everything though, just a warning :D don't go trigger happy in adding everything too soon... although i don't really like the fact that naruto isn't really naruto...but i guess...meh... if he ends up with kakashi then i'm all for it

Can't you change the pairing to the naruto/kakashi/shisui/shikamaru it would definitely be more interesting and fitting and I hope you don't plan to include to much of hogwarts into the story
ah and you didn't write what the 2 change in the plot was besides Itachi leaving two Uchihas alive
update soon ^^

The first chapter alone has me hooked! I haven't read anything like this and its intrigued my alot! I cant wait for the next chapter so because i cant wait patiently i poke you *poke*! Update soon *poke*

loving it so far can't wait till it picks up.