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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better and better every chapter.
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job! This is a great story - I can't wait to see how it ends!
Your writing is smooth and uncluttered; your diction is easy to read. This is certainly one of the better-written pieces of fiction on the web.
Keep up the good work!
~The Disgruntled Fox~
Your writing is smooth and uncluttered; your diction is easy to read. This is certainly one of the better-written pieces of fiction on the web.
Keep up the good work!
~The Disgruntled Fox~
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your such a meanie (pout), I mean, you have pending me of a thread, curiosity is killing me and you won
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 33!!! Oh my heart breaks for Draco!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32 "Desert Places"
Wow!! Harry is one cold SOB!!!
I guess he has become so after all these
years, but, wow!!! WOW!!!!!
Climax is gonna be a doozy!!!
Great angst!!!
Thanks,
R
Wow!! Harry is one cold SOB!!!
I guess he has become so after all these
years, but, wow!!! WOW!!!!!
Climax is gonna be a doozy!!!
Great angst!!!
Thanks,
R
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
definitely enjoying the story! I'm still holding out for a happy ending, or at least a not too bad an ending.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! I loved this part in particular: Yes, you see, the inner core of this one is unbroken,
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 32 It would make sense that Harry doesn't want to wait; why prolong the agony of decision? However, Draco's plea makes equal sense. They have to find a way to make this foolproof. I get the feeling they'll only one chance at this because, if they fail, Voldemort's presence in Harry's body just might spur him to kill them all.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm dreading and looking forward to whatever is about to happen. I like the idea of Voldemort's essence trying to penetrate Draco but unsuccesful in its efforts and the memories attached to his essence seeking out key places. You've really are coming up with some cool ideas...please don't kill Harry..lol