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for The Lion and the Serpent

by emilywaters

schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Emily, what a beautiful wedding!! It seemed so genuine, and I'm happy that Hermione got to plan it since she couldn't have her own. I'm so glad that Draco's old and new friends were there. Calixa has grown on me, and it's fitting that she would sing a song at their wedding. I could picture her doing that and playing the guitar. You painted the whole thing so wonderfully...I'm glad you chose that spot and the vows, especially Harry's really were touching. I'm sorta glad the bond wasn't broken? How sick is that? lol. I really really liked what Minerva had to say, you obviously put a lot of thought into this chapter. Kinda sad this story is ending...but I'll be following your stuff from now on...ok, onto the epilogue..
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! a sequel? A dark one too? with a threesome with harry/hermione/draco? are you in my freaking head or what? we must have been separated at birth!! I'm definitely there, can't wait til you post it. I LOVED this story..going into my favorites file. and I loved the epilogue...how fitting and sweet for Draco to do that for Harry....and of course, how romantic for Harry to trust Draco enough to submit. Best line
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 46!!! Even though it means the end.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A sequel? With Hermione added in? Interesting. Not something I normally read but if you're writing it, well I've give it a read! Can't wait!
person Nikte
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!! I really liked it, and I
person Diane
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That had to be the sweetest ending. I think I'm going to cry. There's a typo in Harry's vows and I wouldn't say anything if they weren't so pretty. I was really looking for a happy ending and I got more than I thought. That was excellent.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. I'm all for a sequel, but I don't care for the adding Hermione part.
person Milva
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, it's end too soon... Love this story :)
person QueenB
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 47 Ooh, there's going to be a menage a trois? I hadn't expected that. And I don't see how it could be sadder than this! I mean, Ron died and Harry nearly died. I don't see how it could get more upsetting than that.

The wedding scene was very moving. I'm going to have to check out that song so I can hear what it sounds like. However, I'm not quite sure what happened with Draco taking that pain into himself using the blood quill. But then I haven't read all the HP novels so some references baffle me. I'll have to check them out in the near future.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow you're a great writer and this story is amazing but im going crazy no updates yesterday or so
far today?!?! i need more, what happens next!