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for The Lion and the Serpent

by emilywaters

person anngelik
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just get chills from this story...in a good way. I can't wait for the next chapter to find what will become of Draco.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, I've never been a freaking groupie for a fic..well, that's not entirely true, there are about 5 I can recall. but nevermind that, LISTEN, I am LOVING this...I know you have a lot of it written because you've posted 3 chapters in one night. Please don't be a tease...post whatever you have written. Gieldan was just an excellent addition that confirms this is gonna be so hot : ) I wonder what memory flashed in Draco's mind though, I'm sure you'll get back to that...loving Dark!Harry....more please : )
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So this is interesting. Draco's tattoo is clearly much different that other DEs. I wonder what that's all about? Was Draco a sexual slave before, why else would the tail be wrapped around his privates? Sexy idea by the way. It's actually cool that Harry doesn't seem to be interested in Draco sexually. I'm sure that's gonna change with time. Poor Draco though, sounds like he's being put through the ringer. Still loving this :)
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God...Harry has gone all Snape on us! Giving Gryffindors all the points and taking unfair points from Slytherin...I love it! That's funny how you had him humiliate Draco in front of the class. And wow, Harry's speech on waivering on the line of dark and light was really creepy. You can tell he's been damaged and is struggling with something. I love the way you paint Draco's feelings in response to that speech at the end. Great writing there...

OK, waiting for your next update : )
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I sooo need chapter 6! Was Draco meant to be a concubine? Or consort? It is weird that the snake would wrap around him like that. Did Lucius intend to give Draco as a present when he was older? Draco was marked at 12?
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just joined you, this is great, can't wait for more. Clicky, clicky on that little bookmark key. I'm a sucker for sub Draco, and my what a nice mind picture of that DM. I'll be watching for more.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
best HD story I have read in a long time. Keep up the good work. I love story where Harry is alittle bit dark. :)