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Wow! That was the most disturbingly dark twisted erotic thing I've read in a long time. OK, I'm sure you're gonna explain how Harry can see what Draco sees in the mirror because the mirror usually doesn't show other people what the viewer sees, but I'm sure Harry's power supercedes that somehow. It's mind boggling and incredibily sexy yet twisted that Draco wants to be tied to Harry that way...and now that Harry has accepted, oh my. This is gonna be so delicious if and when they start exploring this type of relationship. It's definitely not equal on the surface but they are both getting something they both really need out of it...Harry better watch out, he'll wind up just as much of a slave to Draco if he lets this continue. Which is fine, as long as it won't jeopardize their lives. Speaking of which, what kind of crazy plan is he cooking up this time? LOVED this chapter, will read it again.

I sooo need chapter 20!!! Holy smoke! Does Draco know what he's asking?

YOUR STORY IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love it, please update soon!!! And you get a box of heart shaped cookies, I can

im still reading and in deir love with it!!!

I'm still here and still enjoying your story. I am very happy at how fast you update. Great story so far. I feel so bad for Draco. Is Harry going to give him SOME leniency? Draco did try to defend him at one point, he even asked to be obliviated so he could leave. Poor Draco.

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I sooo need chapter 19!! I feel sooo bad for all three of them. Though I fear for Draco I think I pity Harry! Sooo need more!

It's an interesting direction. I've never seen anyone go quite that way, making Harry almost Snape-like, rather than just evil or pissed. I don't know if I like it, but I don't dislike it and it's written well.
I liked "Cali", goddess of death lol.
I don't understand why Hermione is there. If she's still a student then how is Harry a teacher? She obviously couldn't have been held back like Malfoy. I don't see Harry accomplishing anything academically that she did not, at least nothing that would leave her in the dust.

It's all just a bit bare bones for my taste though. Dark fics are usually best when there's more meat in them, something to hook onto so that it feels balanced--a depth of emotion that you can connect with. It's all just quite cold, which I realize is probably purposeful but nonetheless. The more dialogue driven style just feels a tad thin and leaves me with a lot of whys and hows for which the prose doesn't point to resolution.
I'll keep reading though! Please keep writing.

I'm still reading it. It's an interesting take on a Harry gone evil sort of fic. I like it so far. Just interested in how it'll progress.

Woah, this has gotten very good! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm really feeling sorry for Draco, though...wonder what Harry's gonna do to him? EM

sure take Harry long enough. Poor Draco, all he need is some comfort.