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Ch. 31 I never thought I'd read a story where Harry Potter was going to be killed by his friends. But the inevitability behind this fate weighs heavier and heavier on me every time I read it until I can see no other end. It seems...right somehow. Perhaps the only reason I can say that is because I'm new to the whole HP fanfic genre; I only started reading such stories last September.

But I think the exquisite expertise of your story is what's really the issue here. Such is the talent of a skilled writer that they can lead you down the path they choose and make it seem absolute correct. Skilled debaters share the same talent. Kudos.

very very good keep going and post soon
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Sooo need chapter 32!!! I wish there was another way!

You promised this was gonna end well right? I'm worried..lol. I like the imagery you painted of Harry's darkness infecting his followers the way Voldemort's darkness infected the death eaters...the idea of a dark!arthur and dark!luna is really creepy. I know there's not suppose to be anything remotely erotic about what you painted in your vision of Harry's killing of Draco but there was still that undercurrent there...maybe that's just me being a sick puppy. Oh, I hope they can find another way to do this....update soon.

Wow! What a story!! I have not read such an exciting HP
story in along time! Love its dark quality. DARK! WOW!

Thanks,
R

Ch. 30 These were terrible and poignant chapters, plumbing all the characters to the depths of their natures, especially Harry. Those last few paragraphs, wherein Draco understands and accepts his enslavement, were heartbreaking, the idea that he could accept it fantastic. Thanks for all of this.

Sooo need chapter 31!!! Sooo breaks my heart. But I think Draco is wrong. He doesn't mean less. Harry won't say the words to protect him.

This is an extremely well written and well balanced story. You have a very good grasp on your characters, and are very adept at developing the relationships at a more sedate and realistic pace. I hope that you update soon. If there is a mailing list, I would like to be added to it. My email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

I don't know how many times I can say this, but you have a real way with words. The way you describe slavery in this chapter is really beautiful and that's hard to do. Only a few books I've read have been able to capture it and make it sound lovely and seductively attractive to someone who would never think of such a life as lovely, the Story of O, the Claiming of Sleeping Beauty....they way you write about this stuff is really right up with that. I'm so happy Harry doesn't really want to hurt Draco to the point where he's broken and bleeding and I'm glad he can still reflect on his life as good and remember all of the things that made it worth living. So our Harry is still in there somewhere...he's just changed a bit. I hope they can make it out OK, their relationship is intense and real now...it'd be a shame for it to be cut short.

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