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for The Lion and the Serpent

by emilywaters

person Niffler
schedule January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much!!! :D keep on writting please!!
person Lori
schedule February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was an intense story but I really liked most of what you did with it. The only thing I didn't like was the way it ended. I don't know how I'd have liked it to end but that didn't feel right to me. I'm going to look for the sequel now.
person NJamicus
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well... absorbing the Killign Curse was really cool)
person NJamicus
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter is just seducing)
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey
just wanted to say your stories are awesome and really well thought out. am also wondering if you need a beta or know of anyone needing a beta. My forum account isnt working and i am desperate to beta. If you need help please contact me or tell me who needs a beta. please..pretty please. god i sound really sad but it would be sooo helpful if you could do this. Thanks :D
Jess
p.s I actually do think your stories are awesome, i wasnt just complimenting u to get on ur good side...really "angel eyes"
person M.A. Silverwolf
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Hellfire and brimstone, I love your writing style. It's dark and angsty without going over the top and getting whiney. About this story especially, I loved the connection that the two made despite all the isolation around them. I wasn't too thrilled with the merging of Houses, though. It seemed to go against the foundation of Hogwarts as well as what leading research has on the House system as a method of educational displine. I think Cain is my favorite character, more so even than Granger or Potter [loved his snarkiness in this fic].

~M.A. Silverwolf~
person genna
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I understand the Dark Side as a theoretical stance but I don't see how truly good people, the Gryffindors here, would turn into a marauding mob. How does that work exactly?

person Bones
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! can't wait to read more. you are a really good story teller, really really good.
person Bones
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm not a nut...but i did remember that Ron's was unicorn hair. again I LOVE THIS STORY. Love love love love love
person Bones
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story. well written. very good.