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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I love the book passages so much, I wish you'd actually write the darn book! (please do) Keep up the fantastic work.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe that you are one of the most well orchestrated and well written authors on this site. I am so into this story that it's an obsession. I adore the way you have drawn Lucius and I can't wait for Hermione's ruminations about why she kept her mouth buttoned. I'm dying for the next chapter.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great!! Please update soon! Your writing is wonderful, and the story is interesting as well. Can't wait for an update!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing style. This story is so creative, the imagery you spin (especially that dream) is exquisite. I really can't wait to read more, and I hope you do get a chance to post more this week, I'm totally addicted!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo update soon love, i am itching to see more of this story!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Now that Hermione has been welded to Lucius via that Unbreakable Vow, will she go back and ask the Muggle cafe girl to write down the words Lucius needed translations for? She might as well. She's already in deep hot water. What worries me is the part of the vow that adds any future interactions between them. I can't remember - is he married in this story? Since Hermione is married to Ron, I suppose his marriage isn't much to be concerned about, but having married people indulging in extramarital relations would take some explaining for me. Hint: You can get rid of Ron and Narcissa and I wouldn't turn a hair *guffaw*.
This story is only labeled Adult+ so the smut isn't too overt and you've only listed abuse, angst, and M/F. I wonder if these two will be involved physically or will he only terrorize her in her mind? I must admit I enjoy Lucius more as a lover (he can be snarky and have a dark edge) than as a purely evil, cold, Pureblood without any warmer side.
I like all the Greek additions. I'm being brushed up on stuff I forgot years ago and some new information.
Mr. "Light" isn't showing up too well in Hermione's dreams either. Is he pure evil, or will he have more dimensions?
This story is only labeled Adult+ so the smut isn't too overt and you've only listed abuse, angst, and M/F. I wonder if these two will be involved physically or will he only terrorize her in her mind? I must admit I enjoy Lucius more as a lover (he can be snarky and have a dark edge) than as a purely evil, cold, Pureblood without any warmer side.
I like all the Greek additions. I'm being brushed up on stuff I forgot years ago and some new information.
Mr. "Light" isn't showing up too well in Hermione's dreams either. Is he pure evil, or will he have more dimensions?
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely loved the story-i am anxiously awaiting more chapters-hurry!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2: I am just flabbergasted. This story is phenomenal already. The excerpts from Lucius