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for Hungry Thirsty Crazy

by AndreaLorraine

person haohern
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I love the twist you added, it was VERY original...Please update soon!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...lucius has HIV, i dont believe this, but it is a fit punishment for his sins, this chapter made me feel very sorry for lucius, i love him as a character he is so driven by his beliefs.

however yor ur lucius is as true to jk's as can be but i think thats brilliant, he is not trying to be someone hes not.

brilliant chapter, my heart is slowly breaking for him, to die of HIV must be hurrendus (spelling?) although you did say assume nothing, its hard not to, i look forward to the next chapter and the aching of my heart to increase a little more.

love,

A broken hearted LadyV x
person Mona Ellerby
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This has to be one of the best stories I've read here. Don't worry about what you've done--write the rest of it! Please!
person DB1
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@5 OMG! thats different. awesome chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeals in utter delight*

This is so different... so wonderfully written... I am simply in love with this story.

The situation, (Lucius a writer!), the plot twists (HIV! Simply inspired!), and of course the smutty emotions and sexual acts that we've previewed. These little tastes only make the wait for the juicy bits seem all the longer, but getting there is so enjoyable that the length is a recommendation in itself.

ANYWAY! Love it. Love Lucius. Love you. Update soon.

Ta! <3
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh very angsty! I like it!

Evn though angsty fics are not usually my cup of tea I like this story and especially the last chapter.

Keep up the good work!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was unexpected! You have shocked me again! This is one of the most captivating stories I've ever read, therefore I beg you... UPDATE!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...brilliant chapter, and nothing i guessed would come close to what you have written. I'm a sucker for happy endings so i'll hope that this is where the story eventually ends up, however whichever way it goes i think you are doing a wonderful job and i look forward to seeing what happens next.
person DarkLady
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there :D Recently I received an email from one of your fans (and one of our sites) asking if we could invite you over to Granger Enchanted (Hermione centric) and Pure Arrogance (Malfoy Centric) adult fan fiction archives.

I have really enjoyed reading your stories and I wish to extend an invitation to post your fiction at a Hermione Centric and Malfoy site which I believe they would be well received. The main site is called Granger Enchanted and the url :- http://grangerenchanted.com/enchant and the Lumione site is called Pure Arrogance (both belong to the GE family) http://grangerenchanted.com/pure

Feel free to pop me an email with any questions you might have (mistessmalfoy@grangerenchanted.com) I look forward to hearing from you soon.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There are not enough words in any known language to describe the 5th chapter. Maybe aside from, WTF? Holy crap that was... it... explosive. Phenominal. It's so wickedly original that it blew my mind.