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@7 i liked this chapter. i liked the banner to. very good. update soon

*DB*

Your latest chapter was very intriguing,(I hope thats how you spell it) especially the way he kept chanting in his mind, I will not hurt her, as if he needed to convince himself that he's no longer the same man he once was.


I also liked your banner, it was brilliant.

the ending was so... good, so touching. You can make such an atmosphere, I almoust can feel them, hear them . See the warm light of candles in my own bedroom. Magical, wonderfull.
Waiting for some more, as always.
regards
justine

I wish I could do more than gush but I just don't feel as if there's anything I could wheedle at that would make your story better. I know that I get frustrated when people just go, "Love it!" and that's it but honestly, when you're writing so well, it's hard to say, "This part needs work."

I love that your story keeps me hopeful. A part of me wants Hermione and Lucius to screw like bunnies (forgive the phrase) and then the other half is going, "Haven't we already determined that Lucius is dangerous and it wasn't that long ago he tried to kill Hermione?" THEN there's the other warring halves that wants Hermione to find a cure and be wonderful and have a happy ending but I tend to write anti-happily ever afters and so my darker half wants there to be a death. Although, I have to admit, I usually always love the stories with a happy ending and can't stand sad endings.

Oooooh this story gets more and more interesting with every chapter! Please please please continue it!

Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.

Love it. love it. love it! Simply glorious...I cannot wait for updates patiently enough and check the story every day. Love your Lucius and your Hermione, but especially Lucius. You paint him such a deep complicated character...one sympathisizes with him, likes him, cries for him, is exasperated with him and all the other plethora of emotions is constantly present. Simply brilliant writing, can't wait to read more. Thanks!

ok so i really really love this story! please please please update again soon!

That dirty old bird. I had to ask my Nonna....I got the strangest look. Slightly embarrassing, I think next time I'll just stick to an online translator. lol Great update btw! I can't wait to read more. Seriously this is an amazing story and I'm so beyond hooked. And slightly depressed about Lucius dying. BUT you said to assume nothing, so I shall continue to assume nothing. (Like how just kind of slid my subtle opinion in there? That was good right? lol)

I have been absolutely hooked on this story since I read chapter one. You write beautifully!

I'm finding it very hard to "assume nothing" when things look the way they do, but I'll do my best and wait for you to reveal more.

And as for what the old Italian lady said, it took me a while. It's been quite some time since I've used it, and I really didn't wish to call my sister (she's taking it currently) and ask her... My best guess is "hair of gold, eyes like the sky, and a big package" LOL "you'll make/have many beautiful children/babies"