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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was an amazing chapter!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am lost for words. Seriously, that chapter was a masterpiece. Starting from the sunflowerfield over to the scene with Lucius sleeping and the final scene with Lucius and Moine talking in bed. FANTASTIC!!! Do you considere of publishing your stories? Cause I would definetly buy them.
When Lucius stood amongst the sunflowers, all that dark magic flowing out of him, Moine at his side, you could feel it right inside of you. It was truly magical. The way you describe his emotions, the memories, all that pain - it was so real I could grab it. I don't know what to say but: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
I can't wait for the update! Please don't let it be too long.
LOL, Alex
When Lucius stood amongst the sunflowers, all that dark magic flowing out of him, Moine at his side, you could feel it right inside of you. It was truly magical. The way you describe his emotions, the memories, all that pain - it was so real I could grab it. I don't know what to say but: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
I can't wait for the update! Please don't let it be too long.
LOL, Alex
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, she finally got him to open up to her. Please update soon, I really want to see what happens next
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KEEP POSTING SOOOOOON
SOOO GOOD.
I CAN'T GET OVER IT.
AHHH
I absolutely love this.
SOOO GOOD.
I CAN'T GET OVER IT.
AHHH
I absolutely love this.
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
found HTC again, and the plot thickens, muahah. and, since i was prepared for its magnificence, i can reply coherently!!!
oh, how well i know that desire to beat the shit out of your mother for breaking something inside you that cant be mended with a handful of casual, thoughtless words... you did a very good job conveying a chaotic mob of conflicting emotions while still maintaining the urgency and immediacy of that scene. you contrasted the effects lucius' parents had on his evolving psychology very very well - his father's harsh, calculated brutality and his mother's self-indulgent, almost casual dismissal - and it shines quite a bit of explanatory light on his present-day defense mechanisms. its impossible to quantify which is the more painful wound, but i agree with lucius - the casual dismissal from the parent who, in european society at least, is supposed to be the comforter and the emotionally approachable one, is deep, biting, and lasting.
whew, and now narcissa knows, even if she doesnt KNOW faime is lucius' story. (although in retrospect, lucius might have visited another 'she'; he admitted their marriage was not emotionally intimate. but what other woman knowing his innermost secrets would evoke such rage in a man with such self-control? my reader's intuition says 'wife'.) lucius' reaction to hermione's defense of 'soif' - indeed, hermione's defense of the manuscript itself! - was most intriguing, especially on the heels of their deepening relationship. im glad to see hermione hesitating because of their past history and not because of a personal fear of transmission (they are wizards for merlin's sake, im sure they have perfected safe sex beyond our crude latex/polyurethane condoms!), and that she is logically working through the mental blocks she has to a natural reaction to such an intense man. the telepathic influence of one another's neurotransmitters is doubly intriguing - please elaborate on that bit!!
as an aside, i dont know how much you know or have gathered on the drugs for HIV, but if introduced as soon as CD4 white blood cell count drops below 350-500/ul and in proper combination, the treatments - protease inhibitors and nucleoside- and non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitors - can prevent the progression to full-blown AIDS for a decade or more. HIV has become more of a chronic disease than a death sentence, if the patient has access to care (ie, can afford it). if the muse/plot bunny so desires, lucius COULD realistically live a good while. anyway, just tossing in my two cents (paying entirely too much to go to school and learn about said drugs to let the opportunity slip!)
cant wait for the next chapter to see how this latest confrontation between hermione and lucius pans out!!!!
oh, how well i know that desire to beat the shit out of your mother for breaking something inside you that cant be mended with a handful of casual, thoughtless words... you did a very good job conveying a chaotic mob of conflicting emotions while still maintaining the urgency and immediacy of that scene. you contrasted the effects lucius' parents had on his evolving psychology very very well - his father's harsh, calculated brutality and his mother's self-indulgent, almost casual dismissal - and it shines quite a bit of explanatory light on his present-day defense mechanisms. its impossible to quantify which is the more painful wound, but i agree with lucius - the casual dismissal from the parent who, in european society at least, is supposed to be the comforter and the emotionally approachable one, is deep, biting, and lasting.
whew, and now narcissa knows, even if she doesnt KNOW faime is lucius' story. (although in retrospect, lucius might have visited another 'she'; he admitted their marriage was not emotionally intimate. but what other woman knowing his innermost secrets would evoke such rage in a man with such self-control? my reader's intuition says 'wife'.) lucius' reaction to hermione's defense of 'soif' - indeed, hermione's defense of the manuscript itself! - was most intriguing, especially on the heels of their deepening relationship. im glad to see hermione hesitating because of their past history and not because of a personal fear of transmission (they are wizards for merlin's sake, im sure they have perfected safe sex beyond our crude latex/polyurethane condoms!), and that she is logically working through the mental blocks she has to a natural reaction to such an intense man. the telepathic influence of one another's neurotransmitters is doubly intriguing - please elaborate on that bit!!
as an aside, i dont know how much you know or have gathered on the drugs for HIV, but if introduced as soon as CD4 white blood cell count drops below 350-500/ul and in proper combination, the treatments - protease inhibitors and nucleoside- and non-nucleoside reverse transcriptase inhibitors - can prevent the progression to full-blown AIDS for a decade or more. HIV has become more of a chronic disease than a death sentence, if the patient has access to care (ie, can afford it). if the muse/plot bunny so desires, lucius COULD realistically live a good while. anyway, just tossing in my two cents (paying entirely too much to go to school and learn about said drugs to let the opportunity slip!)
cant wait for the next chapter to see how this latest confrontation between hermione and lucius pans out!!!!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
His mummy has the book doesn't she? That's why he's so mad, cause she doesn't realise it's his book...
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good as always. I can't wait for Thursday. What the hell he is thinking leaving like this for days, then returning and burning the script. Okay, Cissa has read it. Has she? But so what? Moine is the one! And they have to find a cure! They have to!!!!!
Thanks for the update. LOL, Alex
Thanks for the update. LOL, Alex
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THURSDAY?!
THURSDAY?!
OKOK, I'VE WAITED THIS LONG...
Well, his mother read the book. And, he said some pretty nasty stuff. Personal stuff.
THURSDAY?!
OKOK, I'VE WAITED THIS LONG...
Well, his mother read the book. And, he said some pretty nasty stuff. Personal stuff.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: Superlative writing! If you don