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this is not a bad story, that has many good parts, i thank you are being far two hard on ron, yes over the years he had said a few hurtfull thanks but he was 11 to 17 and growing up. he has save hermoine life, held her when she cried and been there for her for years.

hermonie is a good person, but she acts like she better then every body else, and she has called ron stupid, imagure and many other name she is far form perfect, and this story she is lieing, and cheating on her boyfriend, but it is like it is no big deal

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Whew... I know I'm late, but I had this on my reading list for weeks and now finally found the time. Mmmm... he's got the hell of a choice there, I'd say. It's the eldest dilemma of all - changing the past might keep the suffering at bay, but will you be able not to lose what you've gained despite all odds? Can't wait to see what Lucius will do, and where this is going. And Tiberius' courageous "proposal" to Lucius made me grin from ear to ear. Thank you; it was worth the wait. C

Excellent story! I like the 'reformed' Lucius, although I'm curious to see what's going to happen with the Time Turner. I'll be tuned for the next installment!

Yay!!! another fantastic chapter!!! I was getting a little misty eyed when he read the approval letter and then his little break down lol swear to god. what can I say that I already haven't???? your writing is amazing and I
can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! i'm anxious! lol keep up the good work!-

I am so glad you updated and I thank you for it. My hurt was breaking for him as he relived his own horrors and fought himself. I also can't stand that he feels he must do this all alone. Poor Lucius. :-( But, great writer! :-) Thank you, hon. HG4eva

It's always a treat, coming across a story that would read just as well if the names were unrecognizable. I have been following you for about a year, constantly wondering if there is a piece of original fiction out there with your name on it.
Because if there is... I want to buy it.

But back to the quandary at hand: I am still undecided whether I would prefer Lucius going through with the TT plan with the result of passing Hermione on the street one day and politely nodding, or the omnipotent you nudging the Arithmancy into allowing the proverbial happily ever after. Though I suspect my personal definition of the latter would more closely resemble the first than is customary with your readers.

In any case, brilliant piece of fiction.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'll pick up my cane and go pimp this story some more... ;)

Hey, yeah. you're story is absolutely enthralling. I absolutely am in love with it. I'm completely addicted, and I can't WAIT till your next chapter. <3 You right everything so vivdly, and stick pretty close to character traits. <3 Oh, the only thing I have to say is.. proof read before you post something. x_X This last chapter had those weird O's in it, and it got really exasperating to have to cut them out and read around it. But otherwise, amazing. KEEP IT GOING. <3 PLEASE.

I love this story. It is most definitely my favorite LM/HG story. Thanks for the great work and the update. I am literally on the edge of my seat to read what happens next.

I don't want him to do it. What if he never meets herimone?