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PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEASE continue writing!

This is my favourite fic!
Please?

This is so insightful. I can't raise the roof high enough for all the praise I feel toward your writing talent and ability.

I am humbled by what you've had to say.

Chapter 12: I assume some of Hermione

Reading your insights to Lucius' life is like watching a train wreck. It hurts to read about his experiences the twisted thing he became. I really love this story, and I hope Lucius will find a magical cure for all of his diseases in the form of Hermione. What a bitch his mother was. Thanks for the great story.

I am so very glad that you updated so soon after the last chapter....Now if only it kept happening all the time, hmmm ~wishing upon the twinkling star~ Well, as always, nothing short of beautiful and poignant and so devastatingly human and painful. The development of these two characters and their interaction is masterfully and believably done. Please continue as soon as possible with the updating...I am simply hooked, gloriously and very thoroughly addicted and need my dose VERY URGENTLY! ^-^*

I love you. If you do not write more--I will probably combust. Like Lucius almost did.

Your story is fantastic. Seriously.

-Nina

Just finished my first exam and discovered that you updated! Yay!

Chapter 11 and 12

Awww! Lucius needs to be fixed...

I still kind of detest his mother, she felt guilty and was too weak to do anything about it. If only Lucius' father wasn't such a egotistical bastard - and Voldemort was so voldemorty...

I was so afraid for the both of them during the scene with the sunflowers. It makes you feel a little warm and fuzzy on the inside when Lucius cares enough about Hermione that a little part of him breaks free to warn her of danger.

I felt like I was going to cry at times... kudos to you!

What will happen with the Critiquill staff and their determination to discover the author of 'Faim'. Hopefully Lucius was careful enough to cover any and all of his tracks.

Waiting for your next update...

Goodness. This story is just so powerful. You have a wonderful grasp on the human psyche and just how fragile and yet, how strong, it can be. Your writing is beautiful and I'm so glad that you take the time to share your talent with us. I can't wait to read more!!

I am totally in love with this fic! Few people can write a story that is good without sex but you are an artist! I can't wait to see what happens next...I want to see them shag!...LOL

Well done for another fantastic fic!

Please update soon!

Oh sweet Merlin! Your writing is so wonderful, so powerful!! I love the way you write Lucius, and Severus, and the way you understand so well, what can happen to a wounded person's soul!
Thank you for another brilliant chapter of one of the best stories I have ever read!!