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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa's read the book, and figured things out, and she's retracted the divorce proceedings. :D
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok...can I just say that I love you? This story is simply MARVELOUS! This chapter was wonderful! cant wait for the next one....
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh lordy me that was hot. I get shivers just thinking about it. I honestly can't wait for more. Oh and by the way, I'm seriously pissed at Ron, what an arse. lol
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful update...I really like how you're bringing Lucius along emotionally. Even though the timing is sort of compressed (all in two weeks), the intensity of all the emotional breakthroughs seems 'right'. Well done! :D
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good heavens are you good at this! LOL! I absolutely love your Lucius. So thoughtful and caring. Who knew the big bad Death Eater could become a loving human being? Ron really pissed me off, but I'm glad because it gave Hermione the push she needed to continue on with Lucius. Way to go Smythe for sending that package. I can't wait to see Lucius's response to a condom! LMAO!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. relatively light-hearted, sweet, very sexy. i enjoyed how you broke things off between hermione and ron - it seemed both realistic and true to JKRs characterizations. ending it on condoms and magical safe-sex spells was great - is that a subtle promise for more lemons in the next installment??? heres hoping for a romantic dinner followed by great sex, and lots of it!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're probably getting tired of people just gushing about your story but honestly, when the writing is genius it's hard to say anything that isn't nonesense. Your story is my favorite romance. It makes my heart ache with both Hermione and Lucius.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was soooooo worth the wait; god I love this story!!!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god absolutely delicious! your writing is nothing short of intoxicating.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! Great chapter!! I am so pleased that you updated and that chapter made up for the time it took you to update.