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This is my perception of where the two of them are at the moment when we head into Chapter 14: Hermione has gone past just wanting him. Now she is immured in what she wants FOR him. The eternal female interacting with a male. She

jeez. you're fucking good.
one of the best written long lucius/hermione stories.
one of the best written fanfics on this site, to be honest.
you could stand to be a little less of a damned tease, though.

Oh my dear that was delicious. So glad to c u back in action. thank you for the super long chapter it was worth the wait.
I can't wait til that bastard Ron gets his comeupance. I hope its xplosive.

Best wishes
SP

oh my word..... I read this straight through. Please tell me there will be a new chapter up soon. I don't think I could live through a long wait. This is my first hermione/lucius fic. I had never even thought of that pairing until a member of a harry potter group suggested this story. It is wonderful! I could barely bring myself to stop reading when someone would come in(was reading at work). I am hooked and can't wait to read what happens next.

Whoo! That was HOT! While it was exciting to see them finally get some action going, I am really glad you have decided for them to be safe about it; HIV/AIDS is definitely not a disease to be cavalier about.

Bravo to you for making their protection have such an interseting mix of muggle and magical means. I'm supposing this will mean more in-depth lemons in the upcoming chapters? Although, I certainly enjoyed the lemony goodness in chapter 14.

This is an excellent story. I have been waiting a long time for this update. It was great! Thanks so much! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Now that was hot. I can

I can't tell you how happy I was to see you had updated. It really shows you that spent a month writing this chapter; it was done very well. I have to say, I'm a little jealous of Hermione (and not just for getting Lucius); Crookshanks loves her when she comes back from a trip. My cat pees in my room and ignores me. He's a charmer.

I have no idea what you did since the last chapter but it certainly paid off. It was fantastic. Sensua, hot, sexy, and definetly worth waiting for. Oh finally they got their stuff together. I can't wait for the exploration of the 36 condoms! 36? I guess the amount lasts two nights? Or will Lucius make us laugh with being a little clumsy and destroying one by one? Oh I can see that scene, both in bed, both needy and turned on beyond imagination and then none of them capable of putting the latex over his crown jewels. Hilarious!
Well whatever you will come up with I'm going to check it out and I'm sure it will be cool.
LOL, Alex

What a great way to end the chapter! This story gets better and better with each chapter. I'm looking forward to the moment when Hermione and Lucius can finally stop holding back (Healer Smythe's package will make sure that happens soon I hope)!

"He's got hair like gold and eyes like the sky, and a really big package. You'll make lots of babies with that one." Or words to that effect (my mother was from Venice, and we spoke Italian at home, while I was growing up, until she died when I was ten). I had to stop and review. A lovely story so far. You've made Lucius' situation one full of poignancy and pathos. Well done! :D