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for Hungry Thirsty Crazy

by AndreaLorraine

schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing update as always. Lucius is too cute for words. PLEASE let them find a cure, seriously, the thought of him dying just kills me! Sorry, sorry, I won't beg again.....at least for a few chapters. LOL I can't wait for more!!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merlin, I love this story. Not only is the smut fantastic, but their relationship is so much fun. I love the little bantering they do back and forth, it's almost cute! *gasp* Did I just call a Malfoy cute?! LMAO! The runes thing was awesome. Great story!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing use of runes. Also, nice to see Professor Sinistra get an actual personality and character. I like what you've done with it, and can't wait for the next installment. I sympathize with the school bit; I'm going back tomorrow (Monday) (today now, I guess), and I've got a huge workload ahead.

As for literature, I don't read a whole lot of it, but I guess it depends on what you're looking for. I'd be interested in seeing his reaction to Lovecraft; I read "Call of Cthulhu" a few weeks back and woke up five times that night from nightmares. However, it does seem like an odd choice. Maybe later on he can read a book with a happy ending; Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte is a particularly good one. A happy ending, yes, but at a price. Hope I didn't spoil it for you, but there really should be a statute of limitations on spoilers.
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. This chapter had just the right mix of lightness, a bit of suspense and in the end: HOPE that Lucius
person Lils
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! ^_^
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I simply love, love, love your story. It's by far my favourit at the moment, I think. You always include stuff in your updates that make me wonder. I cannot really put a finger on what it is exactly, but there are always extraordinary ideas or even small details you describe that make this story so special. The runes... Great. I really wonder where you get those ideas!

I am really happy that you updated and I am obviously already waiting for the next chapter. But as my dad always says: "Education first!" (Oh yes, he says that all the time! But then he is soooo proud that his little girl is doing her Masters... So I forgive him ;-)) So, good luck for your Masters, though I hope it will let you a little time for your fanfiction!
person kazfeist
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This. Was. Luscious. :D I particularly loved the Rune stuff. When we do HP dress-up, I am always Prof. Sinistra, temporary Head of Slytherin House in the absense of Prof. Snape. I thought she taught Astronomy, though. Much better to have her teach Runes, in my opinion. As for being related to Feist, I dunno. I mean, the name ain't 'Smith', is it? It's my married name, though. Thanks so much for the update! Good luck on year two of your postgrad stuff.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! I think Lucius will flip when he gets a taste of his runes medicine...he he! But in a good way!

Glad to know you are a chick! We girlie HP fan fic authors need to stick together and strengthen da sistahood! Gawd how corny did that sound? BTW I am no afro american rapper chick...I'm a late twenties Aussie white anglo saxon chick into 80's top 40 music..he he!

Well done another fine chapppie!
person Mia
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how fiercly intelligent you have made our Lucius. And I love how casually and gracefully he weilds that intellect. I am amazed by your work and your intricacy within this story. I will always want more from this, even after the final chapter has been submitted al fin. You have the most amazing way with words that I have run across in many thousands of writings. Thank you for sharing and illuminating the lives of us meager readers for a small measure of time. Thank you.

~~~~~~~~Mia~~~~~~~~~~~
person nitesfool
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SWEET.... BUT UNDENIBLY TANTALIZING AND SEZY ALL AT THE SAME TIME! the was only one thing that i couldn't get though... what was the last spell... i thought about it, and thought about it, left for a few days, came back reread it and thought about it somemore and i haven't come up with anything conclusive about this "watersport" oh well, perhaps u can clarify it or add that scene in later on in the story. either option is agreeable to me.... keep up the good work and don't forget about SBF...kisses!