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Chapter 17: Yay, another chapter already! Especially in the Harry Potter fanficdom, my guess would be that it

I vote for Faustus. He was the oldest (surviving to adulthood) son of Lucius Cornelius Sulla, a Roman dictator. It sounds like a cat type of name to me and continues the Roman name theme.

Wow another lovely chappie with a HOT quickie in the middle! I can't wait for the next chappie to see what happens next when Hermione goes to Kucius about the runes and what the kitty's name is going to be. I have an idea for a one shot with an obscure pairing no one seems to write about!

Well done!

Lukipeli- means satan in hawaiian.

This chapter was exquisite. And agonizing too. I kept expecting Ron to somehow make an appearance right in the middle of their exploits. I'd nearly convinced myself that it was going to be seconds before orgasm. Thank you for not having that. But I am anxious about what you plan on that front. I adore the runes thing, by the way. I am thoroughly enjoying your brilliant work. Thank you again for the invigorating entertainment.

~Mia~

As usual, I love your writing. I love how Hermione had to be convinced out of her mental gyrations, and the way she was convinced.

Lucius seems to be coming along, if slowly. The whole chapter resonated with me. I just can't say how much Ilove this story.

AN excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Somehow i never thought that Lucius was a cold man! And that scene at the MOM that you mention ,was prof enough of it! He had the power to kill those children and he didn't! It would be so easy to do it! Even if JK just decided spare them and then kill everyone in the last book!Lol Like Severus, and if you think about it ,like most Slytherins, he is a man with strong emotions and ambition, power and strength, and with a great deal of self-control,( well we know self-control was not one of Bella's characteristics,lol), but it's easy to see that they all were a mask! And you mention that!But Hermione ,being a Gryffindor, and not only because she experienced is sarcasm , is as prejudiced as him, all Gryffindors are ,and she would always go through all that thinking,trying to prove that a Slytherin would never ,ever be a loving person! Gryffindors do believe that they are the only ones that never go wrong , and their loyalty, i think is non existent!And they never consider that some of them could have a reason to follow LV! They just see the world in black and white( or Red and gold)!
The only true Gryffindor, for me is Neville!I love Hermione with the Slytherins in fanon, but i can't stand her in the books!
I just love the way you can see Lucius the same way as i do!

mm, I went back to reread this and it's even better than I remember - great job.

Excellent, excellent story. Each chapter makes me feel an array of emotions. Sometimes I cry, sometimes i'm angry, and the ones with the lemons make me aroused! And many times I'm feeling different emotions in just one chapter. I absolutely love this story and wait with anticipation for every chapter. I worry about Hermione though. If I was in her position I could find myself falling in love with Lucius. It sounds like even if she doesn't fall in love with him, losing Lucius is going to be difficult for her. I know it will be for me!!! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and seeing if she pays Lucius in kind with runes of her own. Keep up the excellent work!!

I can not tell you how happy I was to see this chapter when I went through my bookmark list. I bookmarked this story and periodically check it in the hopes that you have updated. I was so very happy.
Don't worry. I work night desk at a hotel so am up most of the night anyway. I usually try to take a nap so I am mostly awake for the four hours left before I get off work, but believe me, losing sleep to read more about Lucius and Hermione is not something I complain about.
I loved this chapter. I was pleasantly surprised to read the use of runes in here, even more so to read that unlike some people, you actually did research to use the correct ones. This chapter had an amazing mixture of apprehension and sweetness to it. I willl yet again be on pins and needles awaiting the next chapter to see Lucius' reaction to Hermione when she uses MINE on him. Do not worry. I shall strive to be as patient as I was while waiting for this chapter. Which means I shall check back every single day and then become depressed and check back roughly once a week.
Yes, I know that little flare of satisfaction when one converts someone. I did it to a coworker when I got her hooked on Sherrilyn Kenyon novels. *giggles* I was a devout snarry and harry shipper, but now I have added Lumione to my list. You may proudly puff out your chest and give yourself a hardy pat on the back. I have boarded the ship and will be attempting to pull others aboard as well by making them read this story. LOL