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Chapter 18: Obviously you know I submitted no kitten names. I couldn

This chapter made me so sad for them. But I still have a spark of hope nonetheless. You are an amazing author, and as flippant and stupid as it sounds, I'm sure you'll write us into a happy ending eventually, right? Sigh. I did read your note at the end though. So I still have hope thhptt! (that was a raspberry if you didn't know.) I get rather childish when saddened, can you tell. Anyways, this chapter was every bit as lovely and enjoyable as the rest of this story.'
~Mia~

It's such a pity we wait so long for this story ;) and when you read it its over in 15 minutes., pitypitypity! I hope you'll update soon,. Though I do have to say that .., well., it takes so long to read another chapter that its just hard to stay hooked,. and in the last two chapters., so few has happened., I hope the next chapter will be more interesting and knowing this story, I think it will ;) G

What a beautifully done chapter. I can understand Hermione's dilemma. She finally has someone who really understands her. Doesn't treat her as if she's just a brain, or look at her like she's gone crazy at times. People are so hard and often irrational. We tell our loved ones that we want them to be happy. That as long as they're happy, we're happy. Because we love them. But when it comes down to it. Most people really mean, I love you and want you to be happy.....unless it makes me unhappy or doesn't conform to what I think you should be doing. Hermione is that situation with Harry and Ron when it comes to Lucius. Her only advantage is, she knows it. I can't wait for more!

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Nooo... You wouldn't be so cruel! You cannot seriously consider to separate them. I don't belive that a second! They need each other, the way you shaped your story they are the perfect match! Both headstrong and obviously intelligent, they challenge and complement each other! I see them end up together, always bickering - or should I call it a loving banter?

This chapter was soooo hot, I really did enjoy reading it! I could so imagine them together, humm, would have liked to spy on them a bit ;-)...

Hah, and I learned a new word, loquacious! I know I already read it before and probably looked it up but forgot it again. Always good to enlarge my vocabulary. Thank you so much for this lovely update!

This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I think that Lucius does want Hermione more than he lets on, but is afraid that he will end up hurting Hermione. I hope that they will continue to be together.

Oh wow what a haaawt chappie! Hermione and Lucius having mind blowing sex seems so right in this fic I can't really describe it! Another lovely effort from you!

Oh BTW my obscure pairing id Neville and Hannah. It's a canon pairing that no one on AFF but me seems to be writing about! Reckon you could have a go at it? No one knows anything about Neville and Hannah so there's loads of rook to move! Go on I dare ya to write it!....he he

Well done and I look forward to reading the next installment!

I think he should propose xxxx loved the smut filled chapter xxxx 10/10

I love Tiresias. He's what a doctor should be, alternately concerned and bombastic. I'm sure there will be repercussions to the Rune fiasco and the joined sex.

I like how you portrayed Lucius' dismay at having been marked, and his complete oblivion to the fact that he had done the same to Hermione. So, I take it the runes have been activated. I wonder what will come from that.

The whole conversation about Lucius being cliche was very funny. I could just imagine he would be concerned over being cliched rather than lightly endowed. Why would he be concerned about his penis size? He is Lucius Malfoy!

As usual, I enjoy your emotionally complex depiction of Lucius.