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wow i really love this... i really do hope this isn't the last of their relationship, it's too sexy to ruin! Lucius is entirely too hard on himself... and Hermione really just needs to tell Ron what for! if Harry and Ron loved her, then telling them off for not excepting her decision should be enough to convince them that it's ok. but that's just how i feel friends should respect each others' choices... meh. might the dirty old woman be making a come-back at the party? hehe!

oh just can't wait to see what you think up to make this all right... oh and how many more chapters til he finishes his second book?

i loved this chapter! *goes off to catch up on the rest of the fic*

oh and i think the Italiann was:

"Gold hair, eyes like sky, and a great package. Will make many beautiful children."

do i get snuggles?! XP

I have one thing to say about this past and that is "Amazing"
The emotions are so close to the surface you can almost touch them and yet you can't.
I could clearly "see" all that happened. You surely do have way with words.

You can feel that he's reluctant to let go. And so is she. But the wizarding world they know will shun them of they went public with their relationship. The muggleborn war princess and the former Death Eater..
What will happen next?

So now up next is Paulo's party.. Waiting (im)patiently to see what will go on there.

This was a brilliant part!

My head is spinning with the possibilities and the amazing chapter. The visuals dancing through my head. You are brilliant. Merci beaucoup.

Both chapters were wonderful. I'm not sure what the complaints of the other reviewers were about Hermione, but I think her behavior and questions fit with her character. I love that they are getting closer and will not let this chapter worry me too much.

I always want "real" people and characters to stand up for what they believe in and want in their lives and not let their lives be ruled by others. I think the people who love us and their opinions are important. We can listen to them and if we believe they are wrong or their beliefs are not in our best interest, then disagree with them with love and strength and choose our own paths. Sometimes their reactions are not as drastic as we thought they would be, or with time they come to see that we are happy with our decisions and if they love us slowly are happy for us. Time sometimes does heal all things (or at least temper them) and although Lucius and Hermione may not have as much time as everyone else, in this day and age they should have enough to put other's reservations to rest.

The other issue I have is trust. Both Lucius and Hermione are extremely intelligent people, although Lucius' choices can obviously be questioned it is Hermione who will fall under the bigger microscope and she (except for Ron) has always made intelligent choices with amazing amounts of consideration, thought, and logic. (Therefore her trouble with accepting Lucius as he is now.) Her loved ones should recognize that quality in her and know should would not have chosen Lucius without thinking it through, knowing who he his, and coming to this decision on her own. Not to mention she is a powerful witch in her own right. I hope she will fight for this.

O.K. end of rant. :-)

Sorry I missed the kitten naming! I'm going with Kismet.

Don't remember if I've reviewed...but I loved the intertwining in this particular chapter of things from our past: the 70's, the HIV-issues that had a sort of perverse 'glamor' a few years back. Now, it's all sort of mundane, isn't it? And thanks for creating such a unique and balanced original character. He's the sort of Healer one could Apprentice under, isn't he? :D

Your prose is always amazing. The words and the emotions ring true. I'm not sure how else to say it... The characters come alive because you've breathed conflict, contradictions and fully believable emotions into them.

Absolutely lovely.

That chapter was HOT! Left me all steamy and out of breath!
Then you had to go and make me feel like crying. I know, I know, don't assume things from this chapter. I understand. But still... I just want to start screaming "NO NO NO!!!!" lol
Okay, I shall be good and sit back and wait for the next chapter before I go screaming and yelling. Especially since I am sitting at work right now and would get in trouble for screaming. hahahaha

"And maybe you seriously underestimate my ability to obliterate it."

That line made me shiver! Loved the bit of bad boy that came out in this chapter. And that trip they took while having sex, that was insane!

I loved the fact that the runes they traced on each other were blazing like that. Especially since they were on Lucius's ass! LOL! So funny.

I read the end of this chapter with such a heavy heart. I understood why Hermione was acting the way she was, but it was still frustrating to see her screwing with Lucius so much. Now that she seems to be accepting what it happening, reality has to break through and remind them of what they have to go home to. Reality sucks. =)

I adore Some Blond Fool so I was very pleased to come across another of your stories. I doubt you need anyone to tell you how truly magnificent your writing is and that your talent in this area is limitless. I sincerely hope you plan on your own works some day because I would definitely pay to read them. Thankfully, for now, I get to enjoy these little goodies. The highest compliments I ever received were the ones that said they could picture themselves admist my stories, part of the action, that they were right there watching everything unfold, so I must say to you, that being a voyeur to your tales is exactly where I find myself, whether it be action, happiness, sorrow, fear or the most delicious of sex scenes, you have placed me firmly in the midst of it all and for that, I thank you. :) And of course I must add the mandatory phrase - please post more soon. :)