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I absolutely loved this chapter! The feelings that have developed between Lucius and Hermione are very believable... I don't want them to separate~!!! I'm looking forward to your next update~

Ohhhhh... Love it!

So it's obvious to everybody else, that they are in Love, but not to them? Sooo typical! 'Then he releases her from the bond and she finally figures out that she's in love with him? That's good, was about time!

But I wonder how her friends will react once they realise what has happened. And she didn't break up with Ron (the git) yet! I guess he will take it rather badly. Won't get what he did wrong at all. (Although he's obviously wrong for her even without his thoughtlessness.)

Really nice update you wrote for us!

WOW!! I want a Lucius of my own. That was lovely and love definately seems to be looming on the horizon much to the dismay of them both. I'm just salivating at the thought of Hermione breaking it off with Ron but by now he's probably using his dubious charms on some other witch. It's not that I don't like Ron, he's probably the most "human" out of the trio, after all, we all have flaws but they aren't so glareingly obvious in Harry or Hermione as they are in Ron which makes him either the most loved of characters or the most despised depending on your viewpoint. Me? Well, the jury's still out.

Again, my first response to this chapter is "wow."

The last line alone made me tear up. I love how Lucius is so vulnerable and yet so unapproachable in this story. He's a mass of contradictions. You write him well. Hermione's vulnerabilty is not overdrawn. I love them together in this story.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I really, really love this story.

I truly love this fic! Must be one of the best I have read so far, not many can come close to it!

This was such an emmotional chapter, You see that they are not just infatuated with eachother, they are most likely inlove with eachother. And others notice it, What hardships lay ahead when they leave their little sanctuary in Italy.?
And he just released her from the vow. Without asking, that also says alot about how he feels about her.

I hope they can have a sort of happily ever after atleast!

What a sad moment!!! I hope everything works out for them!!! Can't wait to read more!!

That was heartcrushingly tender and sweet. I loved how they both initially skirted fearfully around the l word. As always, you writing is poignant, beautiful and gripping. I can't get enough of your brand of ecstasy. It is erotic, and gentle, teasing and oh so compelling. I am once again, awed by your skill. Thank you for the beautiful addition. It was well worth any wait. (And this comes from one who is notoriously impatient and greedy.) No matter the wait, that chapter was worth it.

~Mia

i absolutely love this story. I've never read a Lucius/Hermione shipper..but it is really great. I love how you kept them to the canon, but still made them you're own.

I can only hope that he fights the HIV and Ron doesn't make the break up too difficult for Hermione. Even so, I can totally see this story ending in a way none of your readers are satisfied with: Lucius dies before Hermione can fully express her love for him in words.

When he released her, I nearly cried for them. But one thing, I may have missed it, did they use a condom the last time they made love?

Good Gods, you are breaking my heart! Lucius with tears in his eyes after making love to Hermione, that was what did it for me. So much emotion coming from someone like Lucius. Beautiful.

Things are not going to be pretty with Ron, I'm sure. I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry reacts to not only the break-up but Lucius as well.

Damn, what I wouldn't give to have been along on that shopping trip. LOL!

silly me...i reread. =) still amazing