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Very nice to show some things from Shacklebolts perspective! Guilty, guilty man,. though very understandable! I can't help but say it again, Lucius is soo human., and I love you for it! Poor Hermione., ! She's must feel awful ., And I can only imagine on who's door Harry and Ron are knocking at this moment? Paolo? I sure hope so hehe Would be fun to see everyone's reaction when 'The Secret' came out! Lovely done!

Nice addition. I can't wait to see how the public reacts to his 'curse' and Ron and Harry are the ones investigating in tuscany? wow, what a twist to add. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Amazing. Simply astounding. Not enough words in my vocabulary and ability to praise you for the awesomeness that is your story. See? I have limited abilities here. I just used the word awesomeness. But seriously, your story is simply made of win. I love it. No one can write like you do. No One!

~Mia

LOVED seeing Harry and Ron interviewing the Muggles! That was great. Boy, if they do get answers, they'll be sorry they were asking the questions, won't they? (that's always my mother's advice - don't ask the question if you aren't sure you really want to hear the answer)

Your conflicted Kingsley was really well written. I can see him really regretting having behaved judgmentally.

i do love it when people are cunning! and i'm starting to love tiresias more and more :) i hate that lucius was almost sent to back to prison! i had a bit of a panic! the cavalry bursting in was absolutely amazing! made me think of draco as a brat again! but in a good way :) i hope hermione and lucius do something clever and outwit the aurors! especially when it comes to dumdum ron! ahaha. sorry to hear that you didn't get to keep your cat! and ugh...i feel hermione's pain about daydreaming! classes start on monday and i am dreading it already!! love the multiple updates :) it made the perfect end to a week :D

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
PLEEASE WRITE MORE!!!!

*pout*

Kudos on making it reasonable for Hermione not to clear Lucius immediately, no matter how badly she (and the reader) wants (her) to. I loved Draco's anger on behalf of his father. Gives me great hope for their reconciliation. Why do I get the feeling that Ron and Harry are about to uncover a bombshell that Hermione won't be happy about? Why do I get the feeling I'm going to be counting the hours until you update again? Cracking good story moving along at a great pace and with so many nuances, layers and twists I'm left gasping. Brava

I can sacrifice (or at least postpone) a few lemons in exchange for some amazing plot, so don't worry about that! I know your work is primarily plot-based, and I can definitely appreciate the work that goes into your story.

My favourite part about this new chapter was the insight we got into Lucius' time in Azkaban. My heart nearly broke for him (saying his son's name over and over like that) and it really helps show what prompted his change.

I am anxiously excited about Ron and Harry's foray into Hermione's secret! I'm sure she'll find that she can, indeed, have the best of both worlds, but until then....

Beautiful update as always!

OMG! this story is amazing. I cannot wait till the next chapter..keep writting

I just reread your story for the third time and I still love it.,and I just needed to review again to compliment you on your writing.,
I can't help myself., The first time I read this chapter I read "Patrick ... Writer of FIAM" and I was like huh., but now I read publisher (I read to hasty when I really want to know what's happening., hehe must be your wonderful story) and OMG can you write a suspenseful story or WHAT., I still love it., It's so amazing., the relationship between Hermione and Lucius is just soo..human., I do wonder what they arrested Lucius for., So curious., I hope you won't leave us hanging for too long cause this story is just way to enticing!