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i dunno if i have reviewed this time or not, but.. i have to do it again.. i read the chapter again.. and the more i read it the better it gets.. you are very good at weaving other elements other then the main plot.
I am very impressed by your writting skills and would like to borrow your skills..

omg...i had a bit of a panic attack when narcissa was getting close to lucius! glad that it was more of a bff thing and not a rekindled romance! i'm glad that narcissa has more of a human aspect now, she seemed so frigid and cold when draco asked about the healer! gosh...from the description of faim and how the characters are responding..i wish it were a real book that i could hop on out and get it! and ooo....kingsley makes me want to pull my hair out! he's just to frustrating! i hope dear old lucius does get a one up in him! something quite clever i hope!

loved the CCU idea :) i told me roommate and he just rolled his eyes and walked away :) i think he's contemplating using that excuse though! i am definitely on edge for the next chapter!

Love this chapter, am litterally hanging on the edge of my seat for more:)

Wow... I can't even begin to describe how amazing that chapter was!!! (I believe it was either chapt. 13 or 14.) you write beautifully, and that love scene was EXTREMELY HOT!!! I can't wait to continue reading and see what eles you have planned for our lovely couple!

I am still transported by your writing. It is beautiful. There are other descriptives, but in the end it is the same. It moves me passionately. It fills me will dread and hope and light and joy and suspense and compassion. It makes me want to wax as poetical and lyrical as you do. It makes me wish for the same kind of grace that your writing possesses.Simply put, thank you.

And I would have to remember the word and how to even pronounce it before anyone was impressed by my verbal skills, love.

~Mia

So now we're left to wonder whether the knickers and their attendant DNA will overrule the evidence that SHOULD exonerate our anti-hero! Nice twist... just please don't let this have a tragic ending, ok?

Wow. What an intense chapter. The issue with Narcissa and the healer was a surprise. Kudos to Lucius for not giving in to her seduction! I think it's funny that Ron was the one to find Hermione's knickers. Oh, the irony! So Lucius will be free, but will they still run the DNA and find out who they belong to? I hope not, for Hermione's sake. Harry will be pissed for sure, but I think Ron's head just might explode! LOL!

Still brilliant. I'm glad to see that all the Malfoys are getting things resolved. Great job on Draco and his thawing towards Lucius. And Narcissa was a pleasant surprise, especially the bit about what she saw with Andromeda and the Mind Healer.

Brilliant stuff, yet again! This story never gets old for me. I love the way you've gradually revealed things about each character, especially in the past few installments with Draco and Narcissa. Thanks for the latest monster chapter--are you sure it was 20 pages? I read it so fast! I can only attribute that to your gifted writing; I can't stop myslf from devouring each chapter as it becomes available. ;D

Chapter 24: I suppose Lucius