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Why does it take you so long to update? I love your story and it makes me sad when I check and it hasn't been updated yet....

Oh gods, the heartbreak! It is always when life is most beautiful, when you feel safe and sound for once, when the danger is supposed to be over when it comes crashing down around you.

Well done in building up this scenario. I hope Harry can get over himself.

Reviewing Chapter 27...

SHE'S ALIVE! *clears throat, blushing slightly* I'm sorry. When I saw that this story had a new chapter, that's what came into my little brain. Okay, so, what to say? Um, pure awesomeness! I hated the way you ended that chapter though. I mean, what does he do? Walk away? Go "street-rat crazy" on everyone? He went to far though and I don't think Hermione went far enough. >_> But that's just my opinon. Harry will come back around; I know he will. Harry and Hermione are like sibilings and this is just a set back. I mean think about it. Harry has made worse decisions in his life, WAY worse than screwing a Death Eater, and a changed one at that.

But who killed his publisher? O_O Did you kill off Bellatrix?! Or that other dude? Could they still be alive? I check in everyday and when I saw the beautiful number of 27, I didn't re-read stuff. T_T I'm sorry. Please forgive me. I sure wouldn't be a good muse. So, um, cha!

I'm so sorry for your busy lifestyle. I have one as well and completely understand your situation. One thing I can say is that to not give up on this story, and as for your life, just keep pushing back. ^_^ I don't know if that helps, but oh well. Can't wait for more! Thank you so much for taking the time to help us obssesive fans of Harry Potter enjoy what was not written.

- Jade Rider

And to Mr. Harry Potter. Forgive me if this may sound harsh, but this quote should sink into your brain and rot you from within. Shame on you for hurting your "sister"! XP And to readers of the reviews, for my anger. Yesh, I am insane.

"Life doesn't hurt until you think about how much things have changed; who've you've lost along the way and how much of it was your fault."

This was a great chapter. A bit sad though because of the way Harry was towards Hermione. I hope that he will eventually apologize to her and accept that her life is her own. Maybe Ron can be the smart one and tell Harry that he was wrong, especially calling her a mudblood. I look forward to the next chapter.

Oh my gosh, I have missed this story SO much. I was so excited to see an update and you certainly didn't disappoint. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.

I'm just coming up for air to let you know that I have - after anxiously waiting for an update on SH for months - finally had the idea to google this tale, and I'm glad that I found it. You have me at the edge of my seat, and the kiss in the last chapter was the most delicious one I've ever read. I'm enormously looking forward to read the rest!

That was at the same time strangely bittersweet and healing. Bravo.

Wow. *is too incoherent to leave a proper review now*

Wow. That's genius.

I would have sworn I'd never write this in any review for any tale, but... now I need a cold shower or a cigarette. Or both. For goodness sake.

Oh oh. That was incredibly, breathtakingly beautiful. And the most sexy thing I've ever read. Ever. Bravo.