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by AndreaLorraine

schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 29: Andromeda? Lucius did send a lot of letters. I
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why yes, yes we do like the idea of a Tiresias/Andromeda pairing. I got on board that ship when he turned back to her as he got off the elevator. Hell, in your hands, I could even buy Marietta/Draco. I really love your work.
person Lady Disdain
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oehhhhhh such a good job! Wonderful new chapter., I think I would like Tiresias en Andromeda together! Why not., Mr. Healer is such a nice man and Andromeda obviously lonely so ;) Give them my blessings ghehe., Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Mia
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course we like that pairing. It's ingenius. As is all of your writing. I have yet to be able to anticipate where you will take this. I also am in favor of a Draco/Marietta ship. Possibly. Maybe. Sort of.

Thank you for the joy that is reading your works. You make my day, and distract me when I most find myself in need of it.

~Mia
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more. I think that it would be great for Andromeda to pair up with Tiresias.
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O Awesome, yet again. I love all the details, both writing-wise and plot-wise. Yet another glorious chapter by the amazing FlowersBecomeScreens. Things are getting interesting, that's for sure. I'm rather glad you are updating in a good, steady pace now and it's worth the wait. And, as always, you leave us with a cliff-hanger. KYA! Love it. But poor Lucius must be gettign tired of all these attacks, hmm? I'd hate to see how many he would get if the killer knew the author was him. But, we'll have to wait, I guess. Again, amazing job with this story. I hate, no, loathe the day this will end. But until then, I anxiously await the next chapter.

- Jade Rider

P.S.
Tiresias/Andromeda pairing is pure gold. Plus, Andromeda needs some love. And Tiresias has far too much aloen time. Makes you wonder what he (or even Andromeda) does for fun... XD I am a supporter of this ship for sure.
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow to many things happend so soon here.. Nice toucht.. I can wait for your next chapter....
person Cuthalion
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A Tiresias/Andromeda-pairing? To be honest, that was the first thing that crossed my mind when that security guy made the sympathetic remark. And the rest - good, very good. I like the conversation between Andromeda and Hermione, and that between Hermione and Harry, of course. Funny enough, the movies made me think more than once that they would match MUCH better than MovieHermione and MovieRon ever could (sorry, Rupert...). And we're heading towards the climax of the drama, don't we? (I hope, btw., that Marietta Edgecombe will finally be able to make her amends before Andromeda becomes too Slytherin towards her. The idea that it was Draco of all people who made her see the truth about her actions was a very nice touch). I am waiting eagerly for this to continue - which you should know by now. *smiles* C
person jlclark
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is completely evil of you to leave us hanging like this!!! I have grown to really love this story and because of that I check for updates at least twice a day. So great work and thanks for sticking with this. Also I think the idea of a Tiresias/Andromeda romance would be a lovely idea. He has done a lot to help Lucius and deserves a little affection as well.
person apkblack
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea. (Tir/Andr)

Am thrilled that Harry and Hermione talked it out. Including any 'issues' from their seventh year ... I always felt that was one thing that probably was too delicately handled. Two hormonal young adults, in a horrifyingly terrifying situation, alone together day after day and night after night ... well, realistically, JKR wasn't going to go there, but the rest of us know that at the very least the thought processes would have been there, right?

Am also thrilled that Andromeda took to the secret so well. I've thought about her before, when reading the books, how she would deal with her building relationship/eventual marriage to a muggleborn, growing up a Black. It takes extraordinary strength of character to go with what feels right and true to you when everyone around you is blinded by (fillintheblank). And had thought of the parallels, too, when you brought her up elsewhere in the story. Kudos.

Another connection I appreciated was Draco giving Marietta advice on how to work out remorse when you're not clear with yourself that you are really feeling remorseful.

You do that very well, make those karmic connections between characters ...

It's not clear to me, has Lucius given out the truth of his authorship (is that a real word?) To Dawlish, I mean.

Also loved how you didn't give him (the killer) away till the last lines.

Almost wishing I had something negative to say, so it would be more a "review" than a "love-fest." LOL

Am waiting in the bookstore with you (and Lucius), waiting to see what happens ...