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I'm one of the sad people who tend to go back and read stories several times and I know it

Oh wow, just reread the whole story again, it is still suxh a bloody wonderful story! I wonder, is there a chance you will finnish it? i soooo very much hope you will!

gah! It's not finished!! :flails, falls over crumpled: At least... at least you didn't leave it hanging a few chapters back. That would have been even Worse. Now I'm just mostly worried about Draco. Ron too, but less so; mostly because if he Wants he at least has more family to whom to go.
I love how Draco is an Unspeakable though. Really cool.

Liked the twist with Edgecrombe. The tie between her and Draco with putting family first above all else even if it's a bad choice was one I'd not considered but now seems blatantly obvious.

This has been a fantastic story, and wonderfully written to boot. From the start I was fascinated by how "Faim"'s writing style stood out in distinction from your own narrative. It really popped from the pages. The interplay between the main couple has been fascinating and in such a way that I found it believable from what we know of the canon characters to get there. The depth of your Lucius has been... Phenomenal.

Reading this has been completely intense. Drawing away from it for any reason was paramount to torture, especially during the Time Traveler segment. I'm always fascinated with time travel and possible paradoxes; I think you did an exemplary job with it on the whole. So many variables were possible! It was emotional to see where Lucius DID touch.

Though I highly doubt it, after all this time, I do hope you return to finish this engaging tale. It would be such a shame to leave it incomplete! Plus... I'd love to see if my suspicions about who 47 is are founded. ;)

I really think Luna should make an appearance; I'm sure she'd support the leading couple! I do enjoy their support group so far. I love the Italian couple, and watching Andromeda and Healer Smythe get together was adorable.

Thanks so much for writing.

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I'm so addicted to this story, I've read all 36 chapters in just a few hours! I hope there is still a little bunny floating in the corner of your mind to complete this story. You are a great writer & I hope to be notified if there is ever more to this one. (not sure if my email will show up to you.... so... please, please email at genjuro33@hotmail.com) I will send lots of cookies to feed the plot bunny.....

I loove your story! You are totally my yoda!

First of all, I want to salute the author for this wonderful story. I originally found the story on Fanfiction.net and was overjoyed to see three more chapters posted on Adult Fanfiction. I want to address how the previous reviewer, Hope, interpreted the story. I don't think Hermoine is acting like a child in how she spoke to Ron in the Dept. of Mysteries, in fact, I think she took a big step forward in acting like an adult. Yes, she was a bit cold to Ron but I think that is the only way to reach Ron in the story. Often, Hermoine would placate, explain, and reason with Ron and he would hear none of it. I think that Hermoine was fed up with the secrecy and finally found the courage to move on with her happiness. Now for the fact that, yes, Hermoine indeed did sleep with a man with HIV, she was not sleeping with Ron at the time. Remember, she went 2 to 3 weeks without seeing Ron when she initially went to Italy. Then if you recall, she asked to meet with Ron to break off the relationship and he did not show up until a little after a week later. Hermoine was not involved with two men in terms of a sexual relationship. She has only slept with Lucius for the entirety of her time in Italy. I think the author has covered the HIV angle quite well. I don't think it was ever the intention of the author to focus on Lucius' disease as a main character plot, but , as a foundation of how circumstances rather positive or negative can change a person and how the creation of a hero comes in many forms and different situations. I praise FlowersBecomeScreens for her insight and talent. Please update soon. Thanks.

One of the best stories I've ever read. I am absolutely loving this :) This fic was recommended on Crimson Clad Andarte

Reading this story has been a privilege - thank you so much for sharing it. So well-crafted... Heartwrenching, unexpected, hotly romantic, BRILLIANT! Lucius and Hermione are so spot-on, and you've actually made it work between them. You are an amazing writer.

And, against all odds, could 47 be Snape?

Fantastic chapter- and I still have no clue whatsoever who 47 might be! Thank you for this great tale... can't wait to see more!