rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy this story! And I REALLY like the fact that you update regularly.
I can't wait to read more.

omg....wow. yay!!!!!!! I just started reading this today. and I have already read everything and am addicted to say the least. I adore, I love it, I cherish it. and I can't wait until the next post. I'm just begging to the depths that you won't make me or any of your other adoring fans wait too long.

p.s. Rons a right arse who needs to learn how good Hermione was to hold onto. stupid git. and Draco, oh draco *love sigh* if only he were real and not fiction and my name were Hermione Granger. oh the things I'd do to him. but shhh don't tell me fiance on me. lol

My beta lives with me, but as she's a tad poorley I'm having to catch errors completely on my own, and that's a lot harder than it sounds! Especially as I'm dyslexic and it looks perfectly fine to me; yet I can beta someone else's work 100% because I don't know their writing style so intimately... but I found reading the fic backwards helps as it removes the context of the sentences. I start at the beginning of the last sentence and read to the end, then the start of the 2nd to last sentence and read to the start of the last.. ect.

I thought you said this was going to be stereotypical? The only stereotypes I spotted were that Pansy was annoying; that Ron hasn't pulled his head out of his backside; and that Ginny knew it all along! The whole Malfoy-secretly-loves-her-but-is-acting-like-he-doesn't is new for me, its frequently the opposite way around; their elopement before the law is new; leading Skeeter to do their bidding is new (they normally avoid her like the plague). I have a hatred of stereotypes - and I certainly don't hate this!!

My only complaint is that there are just 10 chapters and that I am waiting impatiently for 11, 12, 13 and beyond!

This is great fun and I love that she is falling into his clutches so nicely. lol I can't wait for their wedding (night) and the weeks after. Please update soon, okay? Thanks!

Great work Em. I love the story and look forward to your next post.

She updates quickly, Hallelujah.

Absolutely loving it thus far. I'm amused at your chapter titles as well, though I wish the last chapter was just a little longer, mostly because I just want to read more!

I agree that it should have been longer, but it was wait until tomorrow for longer (dress shopping, dinner with the parents, maybe a little Pansy action) or go ahead with what I had to get something out today. I figured this would be the preference. :)

damn she did rip his ass a new one cool!

OOhh I like your story very much! Good for Hermione showing Ron what a selfish idiot he is! Draco is doing a good job so far, and i just hope she won't kill him when she finds out the truth!