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for Taking Advantage

by EmL

person Lexy Malfoy
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHA!!! Love the update, hun. Can't wait for your next one.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, in chapter 10. snear -->> sneer.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As long as there's more tomorrow!
person wudelfin
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot damn now that an argument. wonder how her dragon wizard is going to react to ronnikins screw up?
person whogirl
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! They kissed! oh, I can't wait to read about them in the restaurant and what everyone's reaction is. Thank you so much for frequently updating this :)
person EmL
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woops, it didn't occur to me to add the other diners' reactions. That was a good idea! I was so focused on getting them into the dark hall for more making out before I sent them home to fight with Ron that it never even crossed my mind. I have been planning Pansy's cah-razy reaction from the beginning, though, so we'll get some reaction at least. I think a fleet of howlers is in order, and if I didn't like kitties so much, I'd consider having Pansy go a little Fatal Attraction, but I'll definitely take any more good ideas you have. :)
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, so I'm maybe a bit lame but I kinda punched the air and shouted 'yay Hermione' after that speech to Ron. It was just so cool and just what needed to be said to the pillock (although a slap would have been the icing on the cake!)

And that kiss in the previous chapter - woo! makes the story even more promising.

I just can't wait to read the next chapter every time I read your story so its a good thing you post them so quickly.

Clare
person Stag
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting really exciting!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. Take that Ronald Weasley! lol That was great, I can't wait for more!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story! And I REALLY like the fact that you update regularly.
I can't wait to read more.