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i love this! write soon!!

Hah! No one ever said Draco was dumb! And I can't wait for Hermione to realize he really does love her. :D

Hi there! First, you've got me dying to read the last chapter now. lol I still want to read all the thousands of steps in between, but you've got me all curious. ha ha ha Next, I would love to help you out with that chapter, but I am crap at raunchy. I can do tender, hot and a bit naughty, but not really raunchy. I enjoy reading it, love to visualize it, but can't write it to save my life...sigh.

And for this chapter - That was interesting...all these years in love/lust with her and he never even tried to learn about muggles...sheesh, just like a man! lol. I loved Ginny's stance on Ron and Luna's honesty about the whole thing. I like the way you wrote their easy friendship and that she felt she could confide in them. But, it was VERY telling that she admitted to lust. ;-) Can't wait for that wedding night; he's going to rock her little world! And, I look forward to seeing how his research pans out with the Grangers at dinner.

Thanks for updating quickly. More soon, okay? :-)

how come draco is not asking hermione about muggles? dinner w/ her parents is going 2 be interesting.

love it!!! can't wait till the wedding! this is ana amazing story. as for writing your last chapter already... I think that you will make it all work as long as you stick with it.

I don't see a problem with asking for help as long as you give proper credit and work with the other author to make sure the story's consistent in details and tone.
I'm not sure if I commented around Ron before, but I don't think his confession is all that bad--it takes a lot of guts to talk about one's uncommendable character flaws. His big crime was not telling Hermione before that they had no chance, especially when she obviously hadn't moved on after a few months.
I really like Draco's attempts to learn about muggles, although learning from a book is bound to lead to disaster! I also liked that that he made the efforts to resolve the situation with Pansy amiably. Melting Hermione and eating her on a cracker? I like that particular turn on phrase.

*Slaps Forehead* I'm sorry I didn't review before now. This is a very good story and I hope it keeps up. So often I find good stories and then nothing. The author stops writing or they get so busy that they only turn out a chapter every six months. So please keep writing. I'll grovel if I have to. &hearts ~ Crittenz

Excellent two chapters! Can't wait to see what happens next. :D

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Hermione, You go girl! Ron is a pansy and a jackass. Grow up!

Whew, now that that's out of the way...Thank you. I am so glad you updates so soon. I hate WIP syndrome and I really like your story. Update soon okay? Thanks!