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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

person SilverLion
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder when Harry and Draco are gonna get together? This is such an interesting story. I still love the whole 'idiot stick' bit. *whacks an idiot with the stick*
person Jan
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait to see what's Sirius reaction is going to be, when Severus tells him ^_^

Please update chapter 46 soon.

Jan
person SilverLion
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, how is Thomas related to Theodore? Cousin? Brother? I think you should let Sev keep the baby (if he really is pregnant) because I think it would mellow him out a bit more.
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so love James' mood swings, poor Lucius, hehe. I'm glad to see that Harry is warming to Draco. As for Severus, he's just not lucky, I think he really needs to speak to Sirius and hopefully Sirius won't be a complete jerk about the pregnancy. Wonderful chapter as always.
person Jan
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, for Severus and Sirius :D

Please update chapter 45 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so pleased about Sirius & Severus, but he must tell Sirius as soon as possible Dumbledore is completely right about that, I'm hoping that Harry's patronus will be something connected to Draco to show him just how right they are, as for this assignment of Dumbledore's for James I think I may have an inkling but don't want to say just in case I'm wrong
person pink_lemonade
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah! a preggy Sevvy!!! uh hu! oh yeah! whoot whoot!
have i every told you this is going GREAT? cause if i haven't i'd lyk to set it straight that i simply LOVE this story of yours! esp this chap hehehe at last Sevy's gonna get some action whoo hoo! I bow down at your greatness hahahaha ^_^

i didn't like the chapter before this though... i mean if Lucius wanted to have Draco's support don't you think that it'd be great if Lucius actually acts like a father first then ask for his son's support, since he wasn't that much of a father to Draco. then suddenly dropping a bomb shell like that, heck if i was Dray i'd be cursing my own father right about now and dare he asks my suppport after not being supportive himself?! hell no! I really feel sorry for Draco... really i do, his family suddenly went all weird then a new brother AND unrequieted love?! tell me honsetly... did Draco do something to ya to make you all go hate'n him?.... (LOL XD)

I sooooo can't wait for the next chapter! oh yeah! James the psycho with mood swings! what could be better than that!? well... other that James AND severus with mood swings esp towards their lovers, oh yeah! it's be like the icing on the cake!

Keep up the good work and know that you have one avid fan here, anxiously waiting for your updates, Take care ! ^_^
person SilverLion
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Things are getting more interesting. I wonder how Harry and Draco will handle their feelings for each other. Harry thinks it would be weird since they're going to be step-brothers. It kinda would be weird, but I think that they can make it work. Have fun Sevvy and Siri!
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness Draco isn't *giving-up* on Harry. Severus and Sirius are so sweet. I think Lucius could have been a little more understanding towards Draco, but there again, Draco should be thinking about other people as well as himself.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story but sometimes it seems no one but Draco cares for Harry. Also if James has so many abilities why doesn't Harry. Plus what of Harry's past how can he over look it when so many people say they care for him where were they when he was being attacked, starved, unfairly punished?