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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

person Charlie
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're writing about my two favorite pair.
It's sad how it started but I love it.
Poor Lucius, I really feel bad for him.
person Leentjef
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOUR FIRST STORY ABOUT JAMES WAS VERY GOOD
AND THIS ONE IOS ALSO VERY GOOD STORY
SO KEEP UP THE GRAET WORK AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too bad. So Harry is not Lucius? And I hoped he was his. Why didnt James fight Dumbles? He just left his son and lover... hope you will give us answers soon :)
person Jan
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving It!!!

Please Update chapter 4 soon. ^_~

Jan

person goofball
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious where you will be taking this.
However, the thing with the Muggle-hospital left me wondering, because Dumbledore said they had taken James there because of the injuries that were not caused my magic. Which doesn't make sense to me; a broken wrist from Quidditch or other things can be healed by magic, no? Now, if the reason (for choosing the hospital over St Mungo's) is because the wizarding world should not know about James being still alive: agreed.
Just something I fumbled over.
Looking forward to see more :o)
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like it very much. Is Harry Lucius son? I hope he is, cause I love such stories. Hope you will update so
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
person Leentjef
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going
and post soon
bye bye
person Jan
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me Like! ^_^

Please, update chapter 2 soon. ^_~