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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

person Jan
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM

OMG! Loved this chapter!!! And Happy to see that James and Severus are still together. Though I'm guessing that the reason for James mistrust/mad at him is for the way Severus has treated Harry(did I guess right or not? please tell me *pouting*)

Please update chapter 9 soon. ^_^

Jan
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story but don't you think Jame's is being selfish because he should know how harry was being treated yet he will leave harry with the dursley i found it to be cruel and unfair but its still a hell of a plot so keep up the good work and up date soon
person Selera
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely do continue.
person Jan
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this Thred is one of the best 've read, and i've kinda followed this stroy since it started back with the young James at hogworts. the witty words and Sarcatic attiudes give it that little bit of humor to the drama. its very well blanced and it jsut seemed to get better with every chapter that i went through. i like the idea of having james alive still, but keeping to the orgial story line with most of the rest. now the thing with Mofoy that is jsut cute as hell, and seems to suite your James Potter better then Lilly did really...i can hardly wait to see what will happen between Harry and Daddy...
person Leentjef
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good chapter please keep up the graet work
bye bye and post soon
person Jan
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In this last chapter, I was a bit confuse, I thought that Severus was one of James 4 mates!?!?
Lilly being one, Sirius being the second, Lucius the third and Severus the forth...

However in this last chapter it sounded as if James hated Severus, like the books implied!?

Please update chapter 8 soon. ^_^

Jan
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are the two going to meet again?
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh the wonders of time travel! Interesting story and I look forward to updates.
person Leentjef
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Jan
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is getting more and more interesting. Though I have to confess that I am a bit confuse as to why Harry wasn't more shock seeing his "dead" father in front of him, face to face? As well as to why Hermione commented