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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ii like this story but jameses seems like a slut but at last it still want harry with sev or billl hat would be cool please up date soon
person Hine
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If there's a mailing list for this fic, I totally want to be on it. ^-^
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have so far and I am looking forward to another chapter. I have to say that I feel Harry is a little slighted in this story, it seems like he has hardly spent anytime with Harry. Is Lucius going to eventually tell James how he has treated Harry in the past I feel like he should. When are Harry and Draco going to finally get together? I really hope to read another chapter soon.
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon because I can't wait
to see what happens next I hope James and
Siruis Lives in this one.
person Jea
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the kids to find out about them. That is going to be a shocker.
Thanks for updating this story.
So glad to have you back.
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I look forward to the next installment! Please update again soon!
~rah
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where's the father son bonding? I guess I just like to see more of Lucius/Harry & Harry/Draco.
James is cool. I'm glad he's still playful. Dudley deserves what he got.
Thanks for the quick update.
person Jan
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good to have you back !_!

Wonderful chapter!... However I can't help but feel like James is thinking more on himself then his son! It's like he could get rid of him fast enough, however here he is with Lucius staying with him for four days and his family! He hasn't seen his son over 12 years and yet he prefers to send him off to the Weasley's then take him with him! I don't know it just seems wrong to me it's all...

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story. Please add more soon
person LilCas
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please Keep writing