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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

person Jan
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I feel so bad for poor Severus!

Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If Severus likes James so much why does he keep tormenting Harry? I am so into this story, I appreciate the update. Hope to see more soon.
person Bunny
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. But the more i read this story the more i am starting i hate james >.< He says he loves his son, but then why is he always slighting him? Is makes he feel so sorry for Harry, he finally gets a father, and his father treats him like that? Anyhow, i do love this story, i hope Draco and Harry get together soon ^.~
Please update soon!!!!!!! ^.^
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I would be emotionally stunted too if I spent years in hidding. Glad he was there for Harry though.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK I've just read all 19 chapters so far and my only question is where are the rest of them, LOL.

This is a very good alternative to the story line and I liked the bit where Hermione brought up the fact that only Merlin could change into different animals, if this is leading where I think it could be leading to then that's gonna be one very almight twist.

Keep up the chapters I really did enjoy it
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's so good to see James spending time with Harry. So who is Draco going to the ball with? He seems a little down. Don't keep us in suspence, we want to know who gets paired with whom.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story but it seems to be mostly James we are dealing with where is the sneaky, stubborn,extra harry, always in trouble there is another one.
person Jan
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
From previous (The Prophecy of the Phoenix) parts of this story, I thought it was mention that James was mated/married to Lily, but also had as mates Sirius, Severus, and Lucius? Am I correct or am I thinking of a different story? If so it seems in this sequel that he's only truly been mated to Lily and Lucius.

Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^

Jan
person Jena
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonder how Lucius feels about that.
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it still say harry should be with sev or sir