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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I liked that you brought in the elves. maybe we will see more on that and how they are related. Fudge pissed them off though. They will make good allies for Harry.
person Jan
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cornelius truly doesn't know how to keep his mouth shut... I hope James.. or anyone for that matter, teaches him a thing or two ^_^

Please update chapter 23 soon T_T

Jan
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh, now I feel like there you be dun dun dun music, LOL

However loving this story
person MewMew2
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating once more. Interesting touch by making Harry part elf.............
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story but one problem should Harry I don't know have more of a backbone, is that the word or be a I don't know but it seems he seems to be misssing something.
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting in tense. i think James Potter is an ass and he doesnt deserve Harry. He's totaly putting Luc. before his son. Harry is so much more than James could ever hope to be. He and Draco will be great together is Luc and James dont try and stop it
person Emily
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao how many people is james sleeping with? lucius, sirius, and lily? whats next sev? lol this is good though
person Jan
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter ^_^ Please update chapter 22 soon :D

Jan
person anniea
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a fast update! it was a short chapter. when will harry start to realize his feelings for a certain snake of his? *kisses*
person anniea
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! i started to read this story last night and i finished it right now! this is a really good story, please update soon and when you do.....can you email me a notice to let me know that you have updated? my email's Shadowama5678@aol.com please? i don't wanna miss this story and it was hard for me to find it. i don't wanna miss out on this story! update soon *kisses*