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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh that is so sneaky leaving us with *I think I know who Severus is going to end up with*, LOL. So Harry has Draco on his mind *shifty*. I really do like this AU story, and James trying to help Ron was a nice touch, but I'm intrigued about the Divination teacher now, hope we get to learn more, or is that in the previous story? *feels ashamed* I still haven't managed to read it yet. Could you perhaps have Umbridge poisoned a little in the next chapter *begs nicely*.
person MewMew2
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update! As for pairings Draco x Harry is my favorite next to Sirius x Remus (this paring is a VERY close 2nd. It just seems so damn natural). Please continue to update as soon as you can. Excellent job!
person pink_lemonade
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,
i've just read this story and i think your a wonderful writer ^_^ i do hope you update more i'm at the edge of my seat right now hehehe.
about the sev thing, i really don't know who to pair him up you're very good at pairing so i'll just wait what you come up with and i'm sure it'll be great ^_^ and the thing is he's one of my favorite characters in the book even in book one. he sacrificed so much and yet always seen as a bad person and was never given what he rightfully deserved and even died in the end T_T, and i really think he should be rewarded that's why i like it when things work out the better for him in fics.
but it's really nice that it was because of him that james and lucius got together and now it was even him that caused draco to realize his feelings for harry. tee hee he's like the secret love match maker ^_^. and i really can't wait what you do to that over controlling bitch! i really hate her. wonder what james'll do hehehehe
keep up the good work and i'll be waiting for your next update ^_^ take care always
person k4y3
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi, i absolutly love your story. while sure its not the most plausible story its still fun and creative and i really like it. it does kinda seem though that james isn't exactly the most attentative father though. i would think that after 12 years he would be gushing over his son, not busy fucking(although im not complaining about the fucking. thats rather good too). just the opinion of a fan, you dont have to take it to heart, i mean...it is your story and all. but also you you mind putting me on the email update list thingy? myt email's Tally_otak@yahoo.com thankies!!
-k4y3
person Jan
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That is so WRONG!!!

Poor Draco indeed, hopefully, maybe Harry will have a dream about everything that happen last night...?

Please update soon ^_^

Jan
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah poor Draco, hope you're gonna do something about that *raises eyebrow* OMG the shower scene *loved* and Umbridge that nosey old cow, honestly I wish James would just off her. Now who could you pair Snape off with, I assume that Sirius and Remus are sort of paired (?) but could they do with another? or if Remus & Sirius aren't a pair (just can't remember) perhaps Remus and Snape then...you decide, LOL. I would love for you to put me on the mailing list for updates, email is sarah-1970.smith@hotmail.co.uk
person MewMew2
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, I eagerly await the next one. I must know, what happens with the guest once the children retire to their rooms?
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!
person tiggator
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Draco. That's definitely not the reaction one wants. :)

I just read your entire story and have to say it's very clever! I love how you are keeping a lot of the same scenes from the books in here. I also love the relationship between James and Lucius. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more. :)
person Jan
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, but he does have bad timing, hopefully Harry will remember everything that was said and done...?

Please update chapter 32 soon ^_^

Jan