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for The Phoenix Rises

by greenwizard11

schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes Harry kissed Draco ^_^ Loved it. Can't wait for more, Is there more? K
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yipee they kissed *hugs*. OK I think the new teacher will either be Sirius or Lucius.
person Kim
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is a wonderful twist. Excellent..
person pink_lemonade
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DIE CHO! DIIIEEE!!! why can't you kill her?! if she was dead then Harry would be easy picking for dray!!!! *pant* *pant* *Pant* *Breath in deeply* *exhale*
okey , ranting over time for the reiview ^_^
it's me agian ,
nice update and i'm sssoooo excited for lucius and james' child not to mention severus' will the 2 boys (hoping that severus' kid is also a boy). *giggle* sevy and siri sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!!! nice pairing, can't wait for it to develop. i can't wait seeing sevy and siri's kid i could just gobble sevy's kid up, i hope the kids gets pampered and cuddled the way severus wasn't.
I already know lucius' kid would be spoiled rotten, dray's a proof of that hehehe keep it up. good luck and take care
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are so mean to us, LOL. Please, please get rid of Cho otherwise I may just do some damage to my computer *sniggers* Sirius/Severus knew it, poor James the visions are obviously ver disturbing but considering who these two are, I would find it disturbing too oh and a little boy who looks like Lucius and James but couldn't it just as well be Harry and Draco......
person MewMew2
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. The re-introduction of the Elves was an intriguing move to say the least. Please update once more when you can.
person pink_lemonade
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yey!!! another update! whoo ho!!
the old cow got poisoned! whoop whoop! but i agree with the teachers should've killed her instread. hehe
sooo things are progressing quite nicely with dray and harry and yup cho doesn't deserve harry even in the book it was as if she was using harry bec. she missed cedric... the bitch. i can't wait what you come up with to get harry finally realize his feeling for dray.
annnnnddd Sevyyy? preggyyy?!!! OMG! YES!!! Y-E-S!!!! i love that idea to the maxxx! at long last, sevy is going to get cared for and love, everyone knows he deserves it and it's really good he lied about the antidote hehehe and i'm also guessing james will be doing some pay back for severus since after all it was severus that brought the him and lucius together right? ohhhh!!! i can't wait! sevy and a child?! *major squeal!* so i'm guessing siri's the other daddy? it's still a little vague but who ever you pair severus up with better treat him right or i might just AK that person! tee hee (*bows* sorry severus fan here)
james it just plain wicked!!!
MOre please ^_^
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You poisoned Umbridge *thank you, thank you* I realise you couldn't make it fatal but *big hug*. There's hope for Draco yet then, Cho was never the right one for Harry anyways. I am so intrigued now who you have lined up for Severus and him being pregnant *chuckles*.
person MewMew2
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, very interesting. Although I must say, the vision of a Pregnant Snape is more than a tad disturbing. Thank you for taking the time to post once more.
person pink_lemonade
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! thanks for the update, it's looking up nicely.
it's so nice of james to act like a father to harry and i kinda understand that even though youre related but don't spend that much time together. it's as if you guys are perfect strangers but knowing james i'm sure he'll takcle that problem head on ^_^
It's also good that he's being nice to severus, there's something in psychology that if a thing reminds you of something you fear or hate even if you don't necessarily hate or fear that associated thing you start to hate or fear it as well ^_^ so yeah i understand severus' stand point. and it's great that you can finally pair him with somebody, he needs all the lovin and care'n he can get since he's antagonized by almost everybody in the story hehehe ^^
keep up the good work and take care ^_^
I'll be waiting for the next update ^_^